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    Default Re: The Technical Sword Style Vol 1

    Uppin

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    Default Gossip Lines

    Sheepish Lord of Chaos


    Associated press gossip columns & feature stories
    Rap reviews, The Source & XXL reviews sold to the highest bidder/
    Critical acclaim music nowadays be board & stalemate
    Rap needs a new dictatorship that ainít dominated by commercial shit/
    Lyricist need to step there game up just to sell records you sell ya soul for Fools Platinum & Gold break the mold talk about something worth wild/
    Be bold as Star & Buckwild canít get no racier lyrically niggaz Are nothing but gimmicks out to mimic reality & life/
    Donít see the consequences behind the lies they lead children believing We gonna be saved, first off we gotta change our selves/
    Emcees whoíve exploded onto the scene selling there soul in exchange For what Wu-Tang deemed C.R.E.A.M. Cash Rules Everything Around Me/
    And this motherfuckers ainít seeing shit but stars after the tears comes the laughter and before that comes the fear of knowing your wack but WTF!/
    This whole BEFF issue is contraire
    To popular belief that itís just battling/
    But words can be said but these niggaz & white
    Collared folks only see dollar signs instead/
    So before yo walk out the store wit cha NEW CD in hand Think about what cha putting in your ears & inside yo head instead/

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    Default Re: Gossip Lines

    Nice keep it up bro

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    Default Re: Gossip Lines

    Way to get you point across man ... Nice isht ... keep slinging that fire.

    Peace




    I sew...
    beautiful seeds that sprout flowers thatís deeply rooted
    your weak style-diluted with concepts thatís so polluted
    my words flourish, creating jewels the conscious will cherish ...

    -- Dae Ja Nae

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    Default Re: Gossip Lines

    The title has less meaning than you verse. The verse has more to it and a lot of meaning. Nice verse, here you semed to be protesting to a certain society, but keep it broad- cause its not just to a specifi people. Nice balance of the lyrics.

    Peace
    PS: Keep posting. This verse reminds of the Sunz Of Man album (The last shall be first). The Knowledge it contains (your verse).

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    Default Flow Foody

    Flip the script these newbieís donít know shit about developing lyrics I rip the track wit kung fu and chop suey making their eye black & blue/
    You know me the tactician ripping verbally wit sharp knife precision Disturbing fish and gerbils making these herbals look up definitions/
    Questioning the operation lyrically stapling points to the pad
    Drafting cash outta accounts over seeing when reading papers/
    Disciples trace me back to the days of The Wu, Big, Pac and Nas kid If you didnít feel their shit your considered a newbie/
    Canít school a mastermind in charge bombing you faÁade your made up masquerade exposing you like Van Gogh/
    Oh know donít get blazed as I raise my sons wit pens
    Instead slapping in them head for not scripting scrolls rolled out/
    Doped out in the lex I connect wit checks outta date wait for a sermon Burn mics like evaporating vermin airborne viruses/

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    Default Re: Flow Foody

    Busting Chops !!!! Yeah PEACE

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    Default More Than A.............

    More than a lyricist, I am the definition of it
    Killing words accompanied by nouns and verbs/
    If you trying English the lyrics trying to tap into it
    Hit cha conduit The Technical One will shock u into it/
    A thousand volts do not bolt like lighting it is me the technical one Schooling these one time losers, drug abusers, canít fucks wit NET/
    I am next to rep like Cansaco on deck metabolic steroids leave most Toyed employing me to write cha most gangteristic raps/
    Exactly canít capture me like closed caption unless your Deaf, dumb and blind youís the 10 percent we reinvent the other 5 teach it/
    Canít feature shit my spit will leave ya dumbfounded slumped over in ya whip trying recite the verse I flipped/
    Daring me by the time you figure out Iím back on my grind clipping wings like acupuncture after puncturing it stings/
    Fling it up in the spring get my winter thing binging like Crosby prolly shorty looking like Tyra Banks or somebody maybe my hobby or job be/
    Putting more weight on me than David Copperfield doing illusions at the Ritz Hotel making a quarter mill, looking like a drug cartel/
    Yes I spark well taking hits like Mark Brunell no homo, expel words making u herb out faster than a virgin who wants it but canít take the pressure of pleasure/

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    Default Re: More Than A.............

    uppin

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    Default Wanting to be "That Thing"

    Assorted flavors suits peeping tops checking
    Surveillance camera angles looking for me to slip/
    Fuck the clips I rip mics like machines gunning for ghosts Taking ya blue and red pills thinking u can escape me/
    Aka, "The Human Matrix" I do not play for shit I just speak it Leaving you trying to quits like a heavy smoker/
    I do not thinks so, u better resolve ya woes before ya foes Gang up, plot, and destroy ya/
    I ainít cha employer Iím Techwon the lyrical destroyer
    Compacting completive action into a short minute/
    You ainít no menace or causing no massacre you is a bastard A walking casket ainít blasting you think the nets the fastest/
    Way to get the game mastered Iím past that like a fat kid eating A pound cake donít fake the funk letís unite and show eím up/
    If you nicer then prove it or else ya wealth are pennies not dollars I got flows cemented in stone blowing the locks of u fake rappers/

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    Default Re: More Than A.............

    Uppin

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    Default Re: Wanting to be "That Thing"

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    thats a pretty nice verse man. the thing i think you could improve on it tho is to sort out the bars a bit, in some lines you had two which made it kinda hard to read. keep up with the good work.

    peace

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    Default Re: Wanting to be "That Thing"

    Nice flow, i suppose you were busting.

    Peace
    PS: Keep posting

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    Default Re: More Than A.............

    It was a raw verse, some areas seemed to have its own knowledge, whilst the other parts were like you where busting. But nice verse, it flowed well (although the references - put things into perspective)

    Peace

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