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Thread: VOTES NEEDED theheavens Vs. Dusk

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    Default VOTES NEEDED theheavens Vs. Dusk

    might as well give it a try

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    nothing personal, just an exercise. here it is...


    Around midnight, I ignite
    Pistol-whip your wife
    Slap the Hebrew out of Jesus Christ
    Endorse the Chinese Water Torture device
    Force you to recite the Koran out of spite

    I don't give a damn about your intuition
    You belong in the Colosseum with the early Christians
    I'll drink the period blood of a Jehovah's Witness;
    Strangle your bitch with her Fallopian tubes, listen

    Inside your infant's room, creeping
    I saw your baby boy, sleeping
    My hands around his neck, weeping
    Won't let go until I hear a death rattle for safekeeping;
    As for your next of kin
    I'll suffocate the fucker with my foreskin

    Attack me with your fists, I insist
    I'll break every bone in your wrist
    Promise you'll become an amputee
    If you even contemplate making a fist
    Drown your baby at its Baptism for kicks

    I'll send you a Hallmark card as a goodbye:
    "Dear Dusk, I hope someone you love dies"

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    i guess i should thank the heavens that we got another battle here
    literally, while im spittin missles at the stratosphere
    smashin peers, the mics by my heart like a lavalier
    fashion spears out of rapper spines and apache tears
    choosin to drop an impersonal verse was an act of fear
    knowing im that revered at swfitly ending suckas rap careers
    i hope ya face is good at catching shears, scissor kick
    motherfuckers, then i twitch and brick on their sisters tits
    sick isnt it, must be blasphemous
    i break ya legs, lift the crutch u had to get and whip ya musty ass with it
    short verse but hazardous, quality over quantity
    yet the corp aint wantin me like the nazi's sponsored me
    hittin jukebox's thats the fonzy part of me
    and if heaven's song ever comes on then im jumpin sharks to flee
    nothin personal dude, just an exercize
    im god, as if anyone around Dusk would ever die..haha.....

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    hah so who decides who wins the battle? and thanks for the opportunity

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    no doubt man, good shit...now, votes

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    you do any other kind of writing?

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    nice. I got a friend who works as a film critic in cali. he likes this script I wrote and is pitching it to studios right now. that's the best opportunity I've gotten so far

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    My vote goes for Dusk I just loved his word play and I feel he was little more creative but I give mad love and respect to theheavens.

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    Also I want to battle the winner

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    I'll vote 4 Theheavens. So you're even,right?

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