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    can u elaborate a little please? thx

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    who me? or the krusha?



    there wasn't much in terms of straight dissin, but like you said, theheavens verse was impersonal, so you kept it pretty much like that. your rhymes were much more elaborate than the other dude, with well put together lines, i liked the use of apache tears.

    i dunno, if i vote for someone, i don't want to have to write a review on why i did it, but if that's a rule, then strike my vote whateverwhatever

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    eloels, well theres a battle guideline that u could also follow which is pretty simple..ill post them in battles in the first post from now on...what u just did is fine tho..peace

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    mmm.. yo,, ima give it to dusk jus cuz his flow n writing mechanics stood out more than any line either of you spit.. heavens shit was raw tho, slappin hebrew outta christ, chokin sleepin baby shit, ugggh... the content was there but you got out-classed homie.. that smooth multi flow rolled right ova ya

    vote dusk

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jragonsoul View Post
    My vote goes for Dusk I just loved his word play and I feel he was little more creative but I give mad love and respect to theheavens.
    i agree with Jragon...Dusk verses were a little more creative imo but theheavens did drop some vivid lines.
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    i vote 4 heavens...i came right on point.
    "I deal with tha truth and build with the youth"

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    vote goes to Dusk

    heavens had some good punches, but it lacked. like someone else said, simply out classed. Dusk flipped your lines nicely at the end with the Fonzy references, that was tight. plus i felt Dusk had a more consistent flow, lyrically both were nice Dusk just had a little more backing his then the Heavens

    peace

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    Quote Originally Posted by theheavens View Post
    Around midnight, I ignite
    Pistol-whip your wife
    Slap the Hebrew out of Jesus Christ
    Endorse the Chinese Water Torture device
    Force you to recite the Koran out of spite

    I don't give a damn about your intuition
    You belong in the Colosseum with the early Christians
    I'll drink the period blood of a Jehovah's Witness;
    Strangle your bitch with her Fallopian tubes, listen

    Inside your infant's room, creeping
    I saw your baby boy, sleeping
    My hands around his neck, weeping
    Won't let go until I hear a death rattle for safekeeping;
    As for your next of kin
    I'll suffocate the fucker with my foreskin
    not bad, a little shaky start but decent enough to continue

    Quote Originally Posted by theheavens View Post
    Attack me with your fists, I insist
    I'll break every bone in your wrist
    Promise you'll become an amputee
    If you even contemplate making a fist
    Drown your baby at its Baptism for kicks

    I'll send you a Hallmark card as a goodbye:
    "Dear Dusk, I hope someone you love dies"
    now this is where it gets interesting, I like the whole "contemplate making a fist" part. probably the best part of the whole verse, good enough to garner attention.

    Quote Originally Posted by Dusk View Post
    i guess i should thank the heavens that we got another battle here
    literally, while im spittin missles at the stratosphere
    smashin peers, the mics by my heart like a lavalier
    fashion spears out of rapper spines and apache tears
    choosin to drop an impersonal verse was an act of fear
    knowing im that revered at swfitly ending suckas rap careers
    i hope ya face is good at catching shears, scissor kick
    motherfuckers, then i twitch and brick on their sisters tits
    sick isnt it, must be blasphemous
    i break ya legs, lift the crutch u had to get and whip ya musty ass with it
    short verse but hazardous, quality over quantity
    yet the corp aint wantin me like the nazi's sponsored me
    hittin jukebox's thats the fonzy part of me
    and if heaven's song ever comes on then im jumpin sharks to flee
    nothin personal dude, just an exercize
    im god, as if anyone around Dusk would ever die..haha.....
    Dusk's verse right here is a bit more accomplished writing, not too many syllables per line. Kinda evident he held back a little, que no? Yeah, best line was the Fonzy one.


    Dusk had more quality control of his short verse. But I could tell that theheavens sorta stopped himself, as he'd could've easily go for about another long verse more if he wanted to.


    Dusk gets my vote

    theheavens don't feel too bad



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    my vote is dusk. I won't do a bar by bar analysis cuz' it got deleted last time

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    i vote for Dusk. both you guys are mad dope tho

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    i think that dusk just broght a bit more. dusk used more like longer and more elaborate words.

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