i'll vote for dusk
who me? or the krusha?
there wasn't much in terms of straight dissin, but like you said, theheavens verse was impersonal, so you kept it pretty much like that. your rhymes were much more elaborate than the other dude, with well put together lines, i liked the use of apache tears.
i dunno, if i vote for someone, i don't want to have to write a review on why i did it, but if that's a rule, then strike my vote whateverwhatever
eloels, well theres a battle guideline that u could also follow which is pretty simple..ill post them in battles in the first post from now on...what u just did is fine tho..peace
mmm.. yo,, ima give it to dusk jus cuz his flow n writing mechanics stood out more than any line either of you spit.. heavens shit was raw tho, slappin hebrew outta christ, chokin sleepin baby shit, ugggh... the content was there but you got out-classed homie.. that smooth multi flow rolled right ova ya
"Fuck fame... I'll shoot a hole in a 50 cent piece to test my aim." - Masta Killah (One Blood)
"Kiss the pyramid...experiment wit high explosives. I slap box wit Jesus....lick shots at Joseph." - GFK (Daytona 500)
i vote 4 heavens...i came right on point.
"I deal with tha truth and build with the youth"
vote goes to Dusk
heavens had some good punches, but it lacked. like someone else said, simply out classed. Dusk flipped your lines nicely at the end with the Fonzy references, that was tight. plus i felt Dusk had a more consistent flow, lyrically both were nice Dusk just had a little more backing his then the Heavens
Dusk had more quality control of his short verse. But I could tell that theheavens sorta stopped himself, as he'd could've easily go for about another long verse more if he wanted to.
Dusk gets my vote
theheavens don't feel too bad
my vote is dusk. I won't do a bar by bar analysis cuz' it got deleted last time
i vote for Dusk. both you guys are mad dope tho
i think that dusk just broght a bit more. dusk used more like longer and more elaborate words.