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    Default yo peep this lines n comment or rate pliiiiiz

    metah4 splash session
    yo secluded in the cipher alone with ma inner voice
    ma mental patterns fertilize tha mic n sire this metahphors
    emitted as aztek syntaxes splashin images in yo visual
    ma verbal expression of inner visions
    is out of this dimension so yo mind gatta be in outer space
    to conceive tha mural ma verse hit tha intellectand ressurect
    dead cells in die hard brain
    signals of reincarnation bleep as u try to grasp tha
    essence of ma breathe if yo grip aint magnetic
    i could jus derail yo thought n let misconception be yo destiny
    ma interact with tha mic conceive this lines
    that infiltrate all hip hop ciphers n elevate tha intellect session
    tha four minute trance instill the essential knowledge that hip hops still
    kickin n die hards still meditatin splashin metahphors in the lab session
    heal tha wound in ma ear canal inflicted by one dimensioanl pussie rappaz
    emittin that weak sound tryna pass it off as hip hop
    catch me in the session splashin that metahphor n elevatin this cipher
    to the third dimension

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    Default Re: yo peep this lines n drop a comment

    nice

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    Default Re: yo peep this lines n drop a comment

    yo any mo comments on that verse

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    Default hands of tyme rap;;;rate pleaze

    yo ma physical ounceless as the hands transit me thru eras
    innocence shed as ma soul gets scarred,visions of the past
    engraved in ma mind so the present reflect ma roots
    the future ,jus a brailled earthling tryna peep sunlight
    mentally brailled cant peep ma flow
    tha intellect extract the ore from the aztek core
    clock tickin symbolizin ma acquisition of hip hop tecniks
    so i can dare step into thu wu cipher n spit ma mind
    elevate ma kind stuck on the path to the unknown destination
    sunday sessions tell us our actions determine the destiny
    so i try to walk the narrow but situations gat me deviatin
    cant profess to be righteous when evil seeds tryna sprout
    in ma mind so i dig into ma heart n unearth vague traces of
    humanity hopin to choke out the seeds of devility tryna strangle
    ma personality ma existence done witnessed man subcumbin to
    the will of the supanatural ,to a point where we reduced to pawns
    on a chess board so i keep breathin waitin for the hands to carry
    me to ma final abode

    yo man jus a piece of ma mind ,shit this aint even exactly how am feelin
    sometimes its jus hard to verbally emit yo mind word peace to the hip hop.

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    Default Re: hands of tyme rap;;;rate pleaze

    Quote Originally Posted by aztekmonk
    yo ma physical ounceless as the hands transit me thru eras
    innocence shed as ma soul gets scarred,visions of the past
    engraved in ma mind so the present reflect ma roots
    the future ,jus a brailled earthling tryna peep sunlight
    mentally brailled cant peep ma flow
    tha intellect extract the ore from the aztek core
    clock tickin symbolizin ma acquisition of hip hop tecniks
    so i can dare step into thu wu cipher n spit ma mind
    elevate ma kind stuck on the path to the unknown destination
    sunday sessions tell us our actions determine the destiny
    so i try to walk the narrow but situations gat me deviatin
    cant profess to be righteous when evil seeds tryna sprout
    in ma mind so i dig into ma heart n unearth vague traces of
    humanity hopin to choke out the seeds of devility tryna strangle
    ma personality ma existence done witnessed man subcumbin to
    the will of the supanatural ,to a point where we reduced to pawns
    on a chess board so i keep breathin waitin for the hands to carry
    me to ma final abode
    Hey hows north east africa. Nice ! i see you use a lot of slang or ight be the type of style you have. Its an interesting verse. i suppose you were busting.

    Keep posting- i would like to see more of your verses.

    Peace
    PS: Keep up the good work!

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    Default Re: aztekmonk's thread ( feedz pleaze )

    commentin on ur 1st verse.... ehhh.. i dunno man.. i was searchin for a flow and it jus wasn't there... fuck, it didnt even rhyme really...... even tho your lyrics were slightly intersesting it came off as random babbles...

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    Default Re: hands of tyme rap;;;rate pleaze

    yo guardian kenyas aight,mainstreams fucked but allota cats tryna maintain hip hop in the basements word,by the way zimbabwe should be holdin it down i always thought u n south A
    are the muthalands deepest hip hop zones,
    i wasnt bustin that rap those verses jus hit me suddenly while i was logged on this cipher peace keep it hip hop

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    Default Re: aztekmonk's thread ( feedz pleaze )

    noticed you used the words like metaphors, splashing and dimentioned a number of times, sounded a bit redundant, if this is free style it's cool I guess, it doesn't sound too polished, you should post some written shit - filtered and edited. as for rhymes, contrary to what some said above, they are there, just not in conventional places, you notice as you flow with it

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    Default Re: hands of tyme rap;;;rate pleaze

    Quote Originally Posted by aztekmonk
    yo guardian kenyas aight,mainstreams fucked but allota cats tryna maintain hip hop in the basements word,by the way zimbabwe should be holdin it down i always thought u n south A
    are the muthalands deepest hip hop zones,
    i wasnt bustin that rap those verses jus hit me suddenly while i was logged on this cipher peace keep it hip hop
    Nice to know all is alright. Yah true keep the lyrics underground. Well you know how RAP is here in Africa, but keep to the good work and keep posting up in here. Okay, that cool keep working on your style and lyrics.

    Take Care

    Peace
    PS: There's Dupreez from SA also up in here.

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