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    I will post any lyrics as per forum requirements that I write in this thread. . I've been writing lyrics for a few months, but very randomly and as a sorta random hobby and I havent paid alot of attention to it so I consider these my sorta first verses. Constructive criticism is very welcome.
    Peace

    My rhyme verse will leave you dead in a hearse
    So when I eject atoms and molecules disperse
    I mastered the key to the universe
    Hiatian witchdocters wouldn't dare even curse
    Because to try and put a spell on me
    will leave you three feet deep
    inject your veins with PCP
    ressurect bodies with yeast
    its the beast from the East the venomous rhymer Emeritus bless up.

    The worst part of it all is I haven't accomplished my master thesis, styles are so Devilish, he will be praying for Jesus
    Cause' they worship the rhyme,
    build a shrine
    offer me bitches for their own peace of mind
    cause at the end of the day this shit is God Cipher Divine.

    I entered the stage with minimum wage
    released my rage,
    corrupt their mage, down their forcefield
    force the motherfuckers to yeild,
    decorate my shield with their intestines
    make them think twice before they try and test mine

    Because at the end of time, th end of humanity
    there will be no one left
    just my insanity,
    schizopherenic I'll look in the mirror and praise my vanity
    Say "Emeritus you are the greatest of all time
    top 5 dead or alive straight from the Wu Corp killa bee hive"
    Make fake emcees writhe in pain and anguish
    Until im sane and vanquished
    Till' i'm rage and famished
    So all theres left to consume is my disciples own tomb,
    leave nothing behind, so it goes without sayin' that I consume the womb.

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    Yo I'm here to spit this dart,
    with the conviction of a man locked behind bars,
    imprisoned by the system just for demonstration his numerical art,
    creative murderer he tore they limbs apart,
    decorated their bodies with Biblical scriptures,
    sons feelings emoted through pictures"

    But at the end of the day anger overcame his dreamed emotions
    The devil in his head told him to cause a commotion
    So deep was his devotion,
    Then he instantly started to set it in motion
    He constructed a potion, 12 parts anthrax
    Blisters broke out all over the gaurds bodies caused them to writhe on their backs
    All from being a crooked accountant for diverting fat stacks
    Converted to a devious fiend constructing deadly hazmats

    Strange thing was it was only in his dream, the demon told him to make those guards scream,
    But in reality he learnt that life was just a fatality
    And that killing people was just a normality.

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    good shit

    the more you write the more you will hone in on what your style is. but these are good starting pieces, all i can say is write from the heart and dont try to fake the funk.

    peace, ill keep checkin in every so often

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    yeah im still finding my feet as they say
    the subject matter is the difficult part, theres alot of things im interested in
    much appreciated on the feedback

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    Shoot the troops,blood splatter over breakbeat loops
    Emeritus never lies, always spittin the truth
    Assault rifles, assorted snipers
    poison your soldiers like venomous vipers
    strike the cipher, put a scar on your face like Michelle Pfeiffer
    Whos the best, put your rhymes to the test,
    Set fire to the flame,
    Emeritus reignitin' the game

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    Light a torch to your future funeral pyre,
    harass your family till the day you retire
    I heard of your plight through the wire,
    yet you have the audacity to call me a liar,
    Corrupt bankers, and stacks of guns,
    I'll be waiting nearby
    Till the clock runs
    Till Death is by your side,
    and your ready to ride,
    Rest assured i'll be waiting with Cyanide.
    Last edited by Undiluted Karma; 09-05-2010 at 03:22 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Undiluted Karma View Post
    Yo I'm here to spit this dart,
    with the conviction of a man locked behind bars,
    imprisoned by the system just for demonstration his numerical art,
    creative murderer he tore they limbs apart,
    decorated their bodies with Biblical scriptures,
    sons feelings emoted through pictures"


    But at the end of the day anger overcame his dreamed emotions
    The devil in his head told him to cause a commotion
    So deep was his devotion,
    Then he instantly started to set it in motion
    He constructed a potion, 12 parts anthrax
    Blisters broke out all over the gaurds bodies caused them to writhe on their backs
    All from being a crooked accountant for diverting fat stacks
    Converted to a devious fiend constructing deadly hazmats


    Strange thing was it was only in his dream, the demon told him to make those guards scream,
    But in reality he learnt that life was just a fatality
    And that killing people was just a normality.
    this was my favorite verse so far this is dope! keep it up G

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    thanks mate

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    Wanna roll with a dart real quick?
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    Quote Originally Posted by beautifulrock View Post
    Wanna roll with a dart real quick?
    what?

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    fo get it
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    Spit bars to the stars,
    catch a one way to ticket to Mars
    visit various constellations and alien nations,
    so fuck material elevation
    I bring acid trips
    and fuck catching bodies I'll CIA a fool and make him catch a freudian slip.

    My mind is like a fortress
    can't penetrate the outershell
    Get blown up like a grenade
    Fed-ex the peices to Hell
    First Class recorded delivery
    I'll use your remaining flesh as part of my livery.
    And to try and disrespect me is to meet your doom
    Because your head will end up being a trophy in my living room wall.
    Last edited by Undiluted Karma; 09-10-2010 at 02:06 PM.

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    Densely packed rhymes
    means I'm under pressure to spit them in double time
    So I compress them, zip them up nice and tight
    So when I extract them
    All you see is a shining light
    I can adapt my flow to any elements
    Rain, hail or snow, still benevolent
    And I spit like the 90's but I'm still relevant

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    Vicious beasts traversing grimey city streets
    Pack mentality,torn duality, out for some meat, bout to catch the next fatality
    Shit's unreal but thats just reality
    Lack of food for the monsters, lack of morals for humanity,
    Orphans strive and struggle, strength in numbers, by the fireplace, warm and huddle.
    A plague on the surface of the Earth, doomed from birth,
    Abandoned foetus' therein they lie
    Too young to die, too old to live,
    Too small veins to apply the shiv.

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    hott!!
    keep building!

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