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    THE HIGHLANDER

    I'm a spiritual highlander
    my lyrics hit intense listeners and innocent bystanders
    the intent's to uplift His scripture and defy slander
    it's a rhyme extravaganza this is not your average banter
    stanza after stanza gives props to the Father and stops propaganda
    finishing His business and living as a consistent witness sits atop the memoranda
    an exercise in Christian fitness and my equipment is manna
    when my mission's done I wanna sit with the Son and watch the sunrise from Heaven's veranda

    GOLDEN ARMS REDEMPTION



    'Forked tongue make painful kisses...........and fam, when you talk, then the angels listen.'

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    QUESTS WERE WED

    squarely written, scarcely read
    one with vision of this precision is rarely bred
    his wisdom's been hidden
    unfairly forbidden yet very carefully spread
    I've shared Bread
    my mental treks the breadth where lesser men have barely tread
    some detested, some scarily fled
    some voluntarily followed as I unwarily led
    burdens once carried get shed
    nary a word is unnecessarily said
    let us then tarry instead
    remembering Mary's blessed Son bled to let the dead bury their dead
    quests were wed
    yes, wherever there's fellowship, surely it is there that I will rest my head

    GOLDEN ARMS REDEMPTION



    'Forked tongue make painful kisses...........and fam, when you talk, then the angels listen.'

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    REMNANTS OF MEN

    hymns overflowing with gems pass poetically thru my brain stem
    enter the left hemisphere and get my 3 anatomical planes hemmed
    nocturnal.. I daydream in widescreen HD REM
    my genetic code is read then sent in strands that spin at infinite RPM
    textured more complex than any temple erected by Christopher Wren
    the gods catchin wreck in the sector and his grin is sinister again
    a tenured penman who extends from the descendants of Shem
    my index bends until a blend of scripture and Zen makes remnants of men

    GOLDEN ARMS REDEMPTION



    'Forked tongue make painful kisses...........and fam, when you talk, then the angels listen.'

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    PUCE

    a peaceful theologian spoke metrical poems through PC modems
    holy, though mostly deemed theoretical like the prose of medieval Trojans
    devotional slogans slowly molded to produce the erosion of evil omens
    he chose puce and broke wholly loose from the moral corrosion of Caesar's Romans
    he opened more domes than Homer and rode home like a lordless shogun
    order restored by the reddened-sword holder whose warrior code is 47 Ronin
    emboldened soldier glows hot releasin' shocks like nova explosions
    unique flow pops like street-copped glocks leavin' hoe's optical lobes frozen

    GOLDEN ARMS REDEMPTION



    'Forked tongue make painful kisses...........and fam, when you talk, then the angels listen.'

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    THE OFFERING

    I'm a wiseman who grasps degrees that befuddle Master Masons
    I decapitate emcees and capture sacrificial blood in alabaster basins
    those who falter baste in atonement over bronze-grated altars
    their remains scatter in the ocean as I narrate from John's sacred psalters
    the covetous get crushed with one subtle utterance
    they haven't advanced in substance to understand the sustenance of the covenants
    in fine dress my deaconess prepares feasts and trods the winepress
    for Zion's guests who seek peace knowing with God is where they'll dine best

    GOLDEN ARMS REDEMPTION



    'Forked tongue make painful kisses...........and fam, when you talk, then the angels listen.'

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    DON'T GO AGAINST THE GRAIN

    I harvest raps then carve the caps of cats that go against the grain like a thresher
    craft mathematically exact abstract graphs that slash dimensional planes like M.C. Escher
    a wealth of clever legerdemain invades brains and maintains insane pressure
    self-ordained to reign forever so there ain't no lane for no lame to be proclaimed successor
    see, son rose on the third day and on the seventh I rested
    a poet whose prose and wordplay is Heaven-sent and will never be bested
    my skills still haven't crested yet my benevolence is ever requested
    with His blessed presence I'm well invested hence my development will never be arrested

    GOLDEN ARMS REDEMPTION



    'Forked tongue make painful kisses...........and fam, when you talk, then the angels listen.'

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    SAW

    ya gods juggular got gauzed but it didn't pause the spill at the sawmill
    magicians in awe of the slaughter the kid'll flip visual raw like its Vaudeville
    audible piff riddles ya dome like Swiss bricks my clip's long as a trombone
    avid for bad acid trips.. spit sick.. I'll sic a rabid Pit to go gnaw on ya jawbone
    particular with vics a soot-dipped sickle inflicted the death blow
    picks with perpendicular sticks dig six-foot pits in which bitches'll rest low
    dip quick and ditch the shits.. slip clean off.. a most wicked and sinister scene
    hidden .5th at the hip'll lick clips at the pigs that play close and wish to intervene

    GOLDEN ARMS REDEMPTION



    'Forked tongue make painful kisses...........and fam, when you talk, then the angels listen.'

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    THE ILLEST IN MICHIGAN

    I'm the illest in Michigan, make Eminem look like Gilligan
    where I'm from, niggas trick whips with spinners on winterized Michelins
    crush green, pack iron and pimp links like Phil Mickelson
    rush scenes, blast pistols and big-up queens like British militiamen
    chicks birth illegitimate kids that be sickly and illiterate
    quick evictions and long bids that consist of rigorous imprisonment
    visits and kites diminish the plight but peaceful nights be limited
    pitiful site, criminals released to streets repeat cycle and go right back in again
    still, millions of Christians with religious conviction get it in and be missionin'
    positioned as strictly fastidious and oblivious to negative stimulus and its conditionin'
    War and Peace kickin the wickedest shit since Killah Priest spit heat on 'Elizabeth'
    before your deceased best beat ya feet and kill the iniquitous beast that ya livin with

    GOLDEN ARMS REDEMPTION



    'Forked tongue make painful kisses...........and fam, when you talk, then the angels listen.'

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    THE CRUEL PROSPECTOR

    I have an extensive history of offensive victories
    a sudden switch to the defensive would be senseless and contradictory
    thus once again I press ahead aggressively
    reaching fresh tactical objectives manifests in enemy deaths addressed consecutively
    casualties stack up as I casually pack up
    I simply have an affinity for leaving everything in the vicinity infinitely jacked up
    bitches best get with the Trinity and pick ya divinity back up
    aerial drops blast burial plots: cadavers wrapped in shallow sandtraps clapped up
    got a knack to re-enact graphic combat flash-backs with exact precision
    traffic illicit writtens and amass vast provisions after I ransack any likkle class or division
    the cruel prospector shootin dual-barrel shots at the pop sector
    fools' peril in duels fuel the true-school reflector's resurrection of the top-notch God texture

    GOLDEN ARMS REDEMPTION



    'Forked tongue make painful kisses...........and fam, when you talk, then the angels listen.'

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    STRAIGHT NO CHASER

    can't sit and wait, I'm destined to be greater
    I bait fate's line then blank it like an eraser
    its a waste of time to filtrate Grace, I take it straight no chaser
    I blanket cyberspace with rhymes in the likeness of fiber-optic lasers
    traitors try to calculate the bit-rate but equate to pixelated haters
    blatantly vie to desecrate the high Estate and assimilate later
    Satan's way is fake, he wades in hot lakes of fiery vapors
    as they of divine faith congregate at Zion's gate to embrace and kiss the face of the Creator

    GOLDEN ARMS REDEMPTION



    'Forked tongue make painful kisses...........and fam, when you talk, then the angels listen.'

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    oh yeah nice work WaP

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    Just had a quick read of the first couple of drops. I liked the rhyme patterns and overall structure and content, but couldn't quite catch the flow. Seemed uneven with some overly long lines especially. But it might well just be the way I'm reading it. You've probably got a structured flow I'm not catching.


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    i wished cha would have fleshed out "The Highlander" rap shit would have been dope

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    ONE MAN REGIMENT

    this is the testament of a one man regiment
    devilish men get covered in dust and sediment for negative sentiments
    sinners with a lust for mistrust and pestilence are left tentative and penitent
    as a gust of wind, I usher in a fresh presence of unprecedented eminence
    never've been hesitant to invest in betterment
    confessed my sins, professed Him; then my life was blessed with much less detriment
    accepted the pen and expressed messages that held special resonance
    exercised my intelligence and developed a poetic ethic that blends witness and eloquence
    never will I scribble written remnants that get rendered irrelevant
    this is lyrical and grammatical excellence with an extra-exceptional sense of reverence
    my position is evident in my preference for scriptural prevalence
    my mission's to ascend yet remain humble like the biblical peasants in Egyptian settlements
    hence, without listlessness or impediment I'll press ahead toward Heaven's residence
    where an infinite and incomprehensible elegance is extended by the most Generous and Benevolent
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    GOLDEN ARMS REDEMPTION



    'Forked tongue make painful kisses...........and fam, when you talk, then the angels listen.'

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    this is the testament of a one man regiment
    devilish men get covered in dust and sediment for negative sentiments
    sinners with a lust for mistrust and pestilence are left tentative and penitent
    as a gust of wind, I usher in a fresh presence of unprecedented eminence
    never've been hesitant to invest in betterment

    crazy rhyme schemes !



    My evidence, my own testament, written on wood
    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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