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Join Date: Apr 2004
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Open Challenge
Rules: *50 Lines each. *First to 5 votes wins. *No dick-riding/hater votes (All votes MUST be explained or will NOT be counted) *No bitching if you lose, no accusing anyone of getting people to vote for them. *No freeposting and no comments on either verse or MC until both verses have been submitted. *Up to the challenger who goes first, I could care less. |
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klass a-c merchant
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No one up for going 50 lines??? Come on, step up.
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Disciple of Shadow
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: Temple of Darts
Age: 28
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Im up for it as long as u go 1st
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klass a-c merchant
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50 bars and running through your crew like there obstacles
I'm the shit that you can't move, replay value's non-optional I toss my mic to this cat, just to be fucking humble And grab that shit back like it's rumble in the Corp. jungle I 'strike you down like a lighting bolt' on a stormy night 'Your style reminds me of a maths test', you fuckin' 'bore me', aight? No? Well, duke I wouldn't muthafuckin' disagree Cause I can 'screw Maths', and giving you an 'ass kicking degree in History' I bet you can vividly picture me, fucking literally killing you I ain't no 'blood', but the scene will be 'red' from the 'blood spilling' too Your hardest darts richocet and fucking pelt back in your face You won't have nothing to say because I'll melt your metal brace So you can't fucking talk unless you get a voicebox And I won't brake that with my other hand, 'cause I use that to destroy cops So when this boy flops, I'm a say 'I told you so' 'Your mums on the game at 90', dukes be calling her the 'golden hoe' And so I hold the torch like I'm passing the light here But theres a 'Countdown' to your death like 'Carol Vordermans career' Livin' Blade be a lil' strange, whack as he is lame And gets slaid by the same blade portrayed in his name 'Cause your 'nuttin' but a phony, like a girl stuck to the telephone' Only implement that's fuckin' with my tempo is the metronome Unlike the fuckin' knife which I use to cut your spleen Look, I got you in my 'sights', so believe my shits 'obseen' My flows 'unfuckwitable' like a 'girl without a vagina' Oh I forgot, that's your moms, she was fucked as a minor And served up as pussy on a plate, violently raped Until she dropped the 'Art[ist] like Sage Francis' and 'Escape[d]' It's all backward, like surgeory to get your imagination elevated But your brain couldn't handle it, they had you screamin' 'operation terminated' Infact I heard you was a snitch, talkin' bout the crime crack down So I took this dude to an 'osteopath' where he was forced to 'back' down And you get 'smacked down', like the 'Rocks fuckin' show' This cat tried 'cutting off my feet', so we couldn't go 'toe to toe' They call me the 'king of punches', like I'm 'Oscar De La Hoya' I keyed 50 lines for fun, with 1 bar I could destroy-ya See I hate to annoy-ya, but I really can't stand-ya You a 'Michael Jackson look-a-like, black and white like a panda' My last 10 lines 'come off quick like bras in titty bars' And fucking 'shatter you quick, like broken glass off a vase' I know I started the thread, but you shouldn't have replied 'Cause now your life and rep in the game have just fucking died Coming against the G, is like lyrical suicide If you coming, come correct, like Ruff Ryd[ers] do or die Oh, so the Livin' Blade wanna slice some of my lines? 'Disciple Of Shadow?' I 'cast a dark one over your rhymes' This dude told the doctor he was 'sick', the door was where he was directed 'Cause on a hip-hop level, you 'ain't ill', nah you 'barely infected' So the hero G-Zues prevails, look out for the next issue Duke is like a blocked toilet, full of shit and soft [as] tissue ~ We won't miss you |
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Disciple of Shadow
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: Temple of Darts
Age: 28
Posts: 38
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Ma poison pens spreadin black slander,
leave ya in need of a fuckin first aider, ya fuckin rhyme lika a puny 1st grader ive seen crap lines a 100x wilder this be ma 5th black rap line already cuttin ya off rite at ya neckline got onli 43 more verse lines to go Be usin ya blood to be paintin Wu logo wouldve been finished with this crap ages ago ur rhyme meanings are lost,they in Congo Rip all ya fuckin threads off Wu Corp.com make ya send threats thru yahoo.com ma style makes ya lines go kaboom ma lines invincible like Dr.Von Doom ma lines untouchable,word life! ya lines an endangered species of wildlife cause u cant survive nigga nightlife get slit in the throat with a sharp jackknife ur rhyme brain dead, victim of stroke ya pathetic crap reads like a white joke one look at urs i noe u on cheap coke arcane syllable rhyming i quickly invoke ya beg for mercy,ill fuckin hell revoke cuttin ya live short,like ya fuckin chain-smoke im half way to fuckin flawless victory already ya feelin my rap misery settin urs for lameness down in history cuz urs as cold as frozen white poultry real dead like an unwary shit sentry like a corpse,ur lines're barely paltry example of weak friggin rap crap weak and c-thru like white clingwrap ull be needin a doctor,u victim of rape cuz i did it,makin bystanders gape ya cant fuckin believe it urself get on ur knees,and cross thyself ma style is vile, power to desecrate be bombin ya ass like ya fuckin Kuwait The UN unable ta save ya ass from total destruction wont save it from slavery,even if its on Ebay auction cut ya lines off to the brink of annihalation ya from earth,im a fuckin black martian watch war of the worlds dick,get a notion be clear on ma theory of alien motion so complicated,ya understand onli a fraction confuses ya brain,delays signal for dick erection feedin ya crap with black shit confection that leave ya with hairy vaginal infection makin ya lose the Gay-queen election Endin ya life, like Wu-lethal injection
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Disciple of Shadow
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: Temple of Darts
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damn, how i miss that line?didnt read his lyrics.
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Junior Member
Join Date: Aug 2003
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These two verses was like quick stabs to the ribs
"Livin' Blade be a lil' strange, whack as he is lame And gets slaid by the same blade portrayed in his name They call me the 'king of punches', like I'm 'Oscar De La Hoya' I keyed 50 lines for fun, with 1 bar I could destroy-ya" This lines was the fatal stab to the jugular. Killed blade wit this one. This dude told the doctor he was 'sick', the door was where he was directed 'Cause on a hip-hop level, you 'ain't ill', nah you 'barely infected' I was feelin blades verse on some parts. He was sneakin lil lines in here and there like The UN unable ta save ya ass from total destruction wont save it from slavery,even if its on Ebay auction but overall G's was better. Vote=G the cardinal
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klass a-c merchant
Join Date: Apr 2004
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2-0 to me. More votes needed.
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The Predator
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: in the aLL female nudist colony - Spying
Age: 28
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I GARUANTEE shadow dude gets no, votes.. whoops freeposting...oh so i'LL explain
uh L. Blade sucks compare to G...need i say more? uh it's truly obvious this was no contest, i mean no disrepect L. Blade but oUch his lyrics never fail, i seen em barely slip but everyone does, so you are just dust under his rug......you'll be ok though,just work.... Vote - G OmO < Idiom |
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klass a-c merchant
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3-0 to me. More votes needed.
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Dr. Saunders
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: Granite State
Age: 26
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Vote for G... because I actually laughed a bit reading his shit. Plus, L. B. 's verse was a little choppy.
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G. but atleast the other dude stepped up.
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G wins, what a champ my boy is. Very very good verse.
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klass a-c merchant
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6-0 to me. LOL. But this shit only went up to 5 so I take the vic anyway. Good battle blade, made history with this 50 line shit, shit was ill. Thanx to all the voters aswell. ONE
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next time 100 bars!!
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