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Junior Member
Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: Brixton, London
Age: 32
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and so and so
i see through the eclipse mind body and curvy hips lust redefined ~words break through cusped lips on a wave in a storm - the motion is norm ~commically at the break of day - dance + play commercially immersed in the depths of subconscious verse dabble in dappled light effects - catch beats - in sharks nets _ to nest with the vernacular - bite brains with the vulture - from memphis culture to Egyptian architecture and so and so i see words through broken lips the mind rips and life is eclipsed just a clip from a bad movie when arnie shot 3 bullets and destroyed a whole army calm water haze of celestial days a film of the brave |
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Its a very lassic type of verse, quite estatic. Cause it benefits everyone that can capture its flow. And height of purity in poetic style. Nice verse standard and poetic
Peace |
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