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08-15-2005, 09:41 AM
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Lord of the Perfect Black
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Couplet
Sometimes I take a step and fall 3 paces behind
One line, I’ll break a rep and all see traces behind Talkin bout cat was dope, whatever happened to his rappin? Walkin out, cat does hope, but ever slackin, do this strapped in Not- all- foes, some, my name, they don’t know Spot- fall- shows one, I aim, stay low, though If you out duckin range, I won’t pick you off SHIT! Dude shout, stuck in pain, I gon’ stick you soft Blubber hangin out, cream, iced, runnin down the cone Brother bangin stout, seen nice, stunnin crown, the throne Hurricane storm with I controllin the eye Blurrin stains, warm pith, I told him g’bye Before I spit the last syllable, vowel, and consonant The more I hit, the blast kill the bull, bowel incontinence I rhyme in every single couplet I’m climbin, saver the tingle, covet it I’m climbin, saver the tingle covet it I rhyme in every single couplet The more I hit, the blast kill the bull, bowel, incontinence Before I spit the last syllable, vowel, and consonant Blurrin stains, warm pith, I told him g’bye Hurricane storm with I controllin the eye Brother bangin stout, seen nice, stunnin crown, the throne Blubber hangin out, cream, iced, runnin down the cone SHIT! Dude shout, stuck in pain, I gon’ stick you soft If you out duckin range, I won’t pick you off Spot- fall- shows one, I aim, stay low though Not- all- foes, some, my name they don’t know Walkin out, cat does hope, but ever slackin, do this strapped in Talkin bout cat was dope, whatever happened to his rappin? One line, I’ll break a rep and all see traces behind Sometimes I take a step and fall 3 paces behind One
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08-15-2005, 10:10 AM
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Re: Couplet
The start of the vers eis nice and flows with knowledge there somewhere, as the verse progresses it seems you're now busting. But it has its own element
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08-15-2005, 08:11 PM
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Re: Couplet
I like the way the verse went backwards and forwards
NICE Born
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08-16-2005, 08:52 AM
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Lord of the Perfect Black
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Re: Couplet
Thanks. I guess you have to hear the delivery...
Ben, hit me. I got music to send. heruborn7@yahoo.com
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