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White N Dangerous · 10-03-2005, 07:58 PM

Psycho? Just a little bit, disclaimed by my ancestry/
Darkness draws like a moth and only the light can answer me//
Bullets flying from the mouth, like the climax from Matrix Revolutions/
Beat impossible odds, King David’s Evolution//
The pure rage intoxicates my conscious behavior/
Zombie-like, bubonic plague shit, I’m no savior//
I fight back against the storm, step in the middle of a cyclone/
My rise is a story forlorn, shadow hounds ripping me bone by bone//
God’s light has left me blinded, early comprehension of my potency/
You had me in the dust grinded, paying your pension by my fiery tendency//
I’m never coming back, that’s already evident/
Once I reach those halls I’ll destroy your residence//
Offer no reverence; fuck this fake hierarchy/
Get off me so I can escape this earthly lethargy//

Descent? Happened a long time ago, I won’t pretend//
I wear these battle scars proudly, the devilish dancer,
God’s time is over, I’m that underworld cancer//

feedback?

White N Dangerous · 10-04-2005, 08:18 AM

feedback anyone?

White N Dangerous · 10-04-2005, 04:00 PM

...............anybody...........

the funky drunk · 10-04-2005, 04:49 PM

pretty good son

TUCO · 10-04-2005, 05:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by White N Dangerous

Psycho? Just a little bit, disclaimed by my ancestry/
Darkness draws like a moth and only the light can answer me//
Bullets flying from the mouth, like the climax from Matrix Revolutions/
Beat impossible odds, King David’s Evolution//
The pure rage intoxicates my conscious behavior/
Zombie-like, bubonic plague shit, I’m no savior//
I fight back against the storm, step in the middle of a cyclone/
My rise is a story forlorn, shadow hounds ripping me bone by bone//
God’s light has left me blinded, early comprehension of my potency/
You had me in the dust grinded, paying your pension by my fiery tendency//
I’m never coming back, that’s already evident/
Once I reach those halls I’ll destroy your residence//
Offer no reverence; fuck this fake hierarchy/
Get off me so I can escape this earthly lethargy//

Descent? Happened a long time ago, I won’t pretend//
I wear these battle scars proudly, the devilish dancer,
God’s time is over, I’m that underworld cancer//

feedback?

no homo

White N Dangerous · 10-04-2005, 05:20 PM

lmao ummm thanks i guess?? but w/e its to state ur thoughts on my piece i guess thxs for the feed

TUCO · 10-04-2005, 05:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by White N Dangerous

lmao ummm thanks i guess?? but w/e its to state ur thoughts on my piece i guess thxs for the feed

no homo

White N Dangerous · 10-05-2005, 09:13 AM

lmfao what a dumb fuck

tha god concept · 10-05-2005, 09:16 AM

yo homie im feelin ya style

keep that threa goin son

that tuco guys a fuckin herb

TUCO · 10-05-2005, 10:35 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by tha god concept

yo homie im feelin ya style

keep that threa goin son

that tuco guys a fuckin herb

can i be marijuana???? thats my favorite herb

White N Dangerous · 10-05-2005, 09:43 AM

fa sho thanks for the feed man.

RaE · 10-12-2005, 02:03 PM

...cluttered, flow was still there, but seemed like you rushed some of those bars....good work nonetheless.....1ne.

the funky drunk · 10-12-2005, 02:59 PM

^ yeh , but still dope

_BaLaNcE_ · 11-15-2005, 05:01 PM

peace brutha your ill with it respect due 4real
PEACE

Jabba Jaw · 10-05-2005, 10:17 AM

it was aight

some nice lines in there
some of the lines didnt make sense to me

ya style needs a little work but you got potential

keep at it homie

practice makes perfect

10-03-2005, 07:58 PM	#1
White N Dangerous LyRiCaL sHiNoBi Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Las Vegas Age: 24 Posts: 1,897 Rep Power: 12	Deep thoughts Psycho? Just a little bit, disclaimed by my ancestry/ Darkness draws like a moth and only the light can answer me// Bullets flying from the mouth, like the climax from Matrix Revolutions/ Beat impossible odds, King David’s Evolution// The pure rage intoxicates my conscious behavior/ Zombie-like, bubonic plague shit, I’m no savior// I fight back against the storm, step in the middle of a cyclone/ My rise is a story forlorn, shadow hounds ripping me bone by bone// God’s light has left me blinded, early comprehension of my potency/ You had me in the dust grinded, paying your pension by my fiery tendency// I’m never coming back, that’s already evident/ Once I reach those halls I’ll destroy your residence// Offer no reverence; fuck this fake hierarchy/ Get off me so I can escape this earthly lethargy// Descent? Happened a long time ago, I won’t pretend// I wear these battle scars proudly, the devilish dancer, God’s time is over, I’m that underworld cancer// feedback? __________________ Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched.. for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System.. Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom

10-04-2005, 08:18 AM	#2
White N Dangerous LyRiCaL sHiNoBi Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Las Vegas Age: 24 Posts: 1,897 Rep Power: 12	Re: Deep thoughts feedback anyone? __________________ Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched.. for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System.. Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom

10-04-2005, 04:00 PM	#3
White N Dangerous LyRiCaL sHiNoBi Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Las Vegas Age: 24 Posts: 1,897 Rep Power: 12	Re: Deep thoughts ...............anybody........... __________________ Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched.. for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System.. Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom

10-04-2005, 04:49 PM	#4
the funky drunk Veteran Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: the uk Age: 21 Posts: 1,162 Rep Power: 10	Re: Deep thoughts pretty good son

10-04-2005, 05:20 PM	#6
White N Dangerous LyRiCaL sHiNoBi Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Las Vegas Age: 24 Posts: 1,897 Rep Power: 12	Re: Deep thoughts lmao ummm thanks i guess?? but w/e its to state ur thoughts on my piece i guess thxs for the feed __________________ Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched.. for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System.. Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom

10-05-2005, 09:13 AM	#8
White N Dangerous LyRiCaL sHiNoBi Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Las Vegas Age: 24 Posts: 1,897 Rep Power: 12	Re: Deep thoughts lmfao what a dumb fuck __________________ Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched.. for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System.. Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom

10-05-2005, 09:16 AM	#9
tha god concept akaTRIFE TYSON~spitboxer Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: B.C CANADA Age: 33 Posts: 2,739 Rep Power: 12	Re: Deep thoughts yo homie im feelin ya style keep that threa goin son that tuco guys a fuckin herb __________________ "When I die bury me with the LO on... Official to the death for all eternity and so on" *Lo Down & Dirty* *" WASTED ON THE USUAL WIT MOM DUKES WAITIN ON THE FUNERAL"* *"MY MOUSTACHE LIKE ADOLFS"-Ghostface*

10-05-2005, 09:43 AM	#11
White N Dangerous LyRiCaL sHiNoBi Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Las Vegas Age: 24 Posts: 1,897 Rep Power: 12	Re: Deep thoughts fa sho thanks for the feed man. __________________ Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched.. for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System.. Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom

10-12-2005, 02:03 PM	#12
RaE 3rd Person Join Date: Oct 2005 Age: 32 Posts: 116 Rep Power: 0	Re: White N Dangerous $$$$Thread$$$$ ...cluttered, flow was still there, but seemed like you rushed some of those bars....good work nonetheless.....1ne. __________________ *I bear tha' soul of a'hundred kings, heart of a runaway slave...* shackle my hands an' feet together,...I got a "runaway brain..."~RaE

10-12-2005, 02:59 PM	#13
the funky drunk Veteran Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: the uk Age: 21 Posts: 1,162 Rep Power: 10	Re: White N Dangerous $$$$Thread$$$$ ^ yeh , but still dope

11-15-2005, 05:01 PM	#14
_BaLaNcE_ SLIMEY SAVAGE Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: DEN HAAG Age: 28 Posts: 273 Rep Power: 0	Re: White N Dangerous $$$$Thread$$$$ peace brutha your ill with it respect due 4real PEACE __________________ ........

10-05-2005, 10:17 AM	#15
Jabba Jaw I KILL PEOPLE Join Date: Aug 2005 Age: 30 Posts: 353 Rep Power: 8	Re: Deep thoughts it was aight some nice lines in there some of the lines didnt make sense to me ya style needs a little work but you got potential keep at it homie practice makes perfect __________________ "fuck you" - me

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