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Join Date: Aug 2005
Age: 23
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HERE'S A TRACK U ALL GIVE US SOME FEEDBACK
RIGHT CLICK SAVE TARGET AS OK http://streamer.soundclick.com/speed...+killagaim.mp3 |
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Found My Purpose
Join Date: May 2004
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it was.......meh. The beat was good, but your flow is not too good.....you really need to work on it, because it sounds like you're scared of the mic or sumthin.........completely ruined the song...........just keep workin on it
PEACE
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Join Date: Aug 2005
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u have the emphasis on the flow down, more emotion though, u seemed like straight reading off the paper without making it noteworthy, its aiight, i dont usually like englandish accents over beats, but u have potential, keep buildin god
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klass a-c merchant
Join Date: Apr 2004
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Good beat, all I can say is YOU need to elevate A LOT. PEACE
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Deadly Venom
Join Date: Dec 2004
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no flow...ur muttering not to clear....to mutch bass in ur voice .......and u got to work on ur flow.......dosnt go with the beat...plus during the song u can tell ur going and backing up from the mic
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DA TRIBEZMAN
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: London
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Peace im sure u just starting up, but its really just about the flow, im from england and theres times where i didnt undastand what da hell u was saying....but keep practising, and yeah that beat is real nice.
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Join Date: Oct 2003
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the beat was ok, not really my kind of thing. your flow needs more practise, needs a lot more energy. more confidence on the mic will help as well. don't worry, i'm guessing you've just started out, keep practising and you'll improve.
oh yeah, are you on UKHHF? peace |
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Junior Member
Join Date: Aug 2005
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yeah i am ive only been spitting for 2 months
ok i'll make sure i dont read off papper next time and learn the whole thing off the top ill get the shit sorted gd next time. Not sure if i can change the moving around bk from the mic but ill try lmao mic was a 5er (cnt find the pound sign im in usa and keyboard different) Thankz 4 the feed u all |
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Junior Member
Join Date: Aug 2005
Age: 23
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Ukhhf Whatz That
Guess Im Not |
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Junior Member
Join Date: Aug 2005
Age: 23
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UK HIP HOP FORUM I WILL CHECK IT OUT MORE WHEN IM BK IN THE UK
Peace out |
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