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06-13-2005, 02:45 PM
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Junior Member
Join Date: Jun 2005
Age: 27
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pain games
Life strikes in sinister ways as the devil sits and plays wit our last few days
An were not at liberty to say but we do have the right to kneel an pray And if that means were wrong ok I’ll do the wrong thing for god any day An I’d rather right my wrongs then rot in hell so on the count of three ring that bell…ding, ding, ding It’s time to fight these demons so we must unite if we don’t want them to beat us An take us under to live wit lost souls people pay attention cuz life is gold-en I don’t think u have ever been told thuroly enough If u feel like I feel then please stand up Cuz we gotta fight together Unite as one…there’s no time to prepare the war has all ready begun |
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06-13-2005, 03:42 PM
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The Moon Knight
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: Norra B.
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Re: pain games
damn, really liked that, nice work inifiniti
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06-14-2005, 08:19 AM
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Deadly Venom
Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: Baltimore
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Re: pain games
i agree with spoken
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06-15-2005, 06:17 AM
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Taoist Saint
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: Zambia
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Re: pain games
Nice verse keep it up, but ahh leave the "ding, ding , ding " and such expressions in your lyrics it weakens the impact. But nice verse!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Yah the font size also -keep it in check!!!!
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