|04-10-2008, 09:46 PM||#17|
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ORPHANS OF CUSH
|04-19-2008, 11:43 PM||#19|
I'm not a big fan of the swaying myself.
Anyways I'll just do this by how i see it.
Flow - Blak (although i did feel both were choppy towards the end)
Multis - Blak
Punches - Suave
Nameplay - XXXX
Personals - Blak (the only one i seen was the toe to toe line which was sort of feeding from suave's verse)
Metaphores - Suave
Wordplay - Suave
Creativity - Suave
\v/ = Suave
I feel you both could of spent more time dissing each other, some of it seem kind of self boasting.
Fav lines -
You faggot rapper
I smack your chapters then snatch your casper
black clears his frustration in the jail house droppin the soap..
stop and come out from hiding with coats..
definetly was a close battle in my book, you mos def need to stop swaying though suave.
|04-20-2008, 09:43 AM||#20|
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thanks for the vote, anyone else wannna donate their two cents ??
working cause of cause??
|04-22-2008, 11:34 AM||#23|
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now when I say even, I mean evenly lame. better has been seen from both of you. suav3 had some great ideas in his flow (The League of Extraordinary Gentlemen, jail soap connecting to the closet, the riddler) but Blak executed his way better. That casper line was nice.
weep for lost babylon,
the bleeding god, the forgotten sheep slaughtered in a forest of evil fog
bordered by a sea of faults,
fleeing mobs turn to see the holocaust and become kings and queens of salt
screaming shots, police and chalk,
wingless fallen demons walking among us as people...
|04-25-2008, 10:48 PM||#27|
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i don't really feel like doing a verse-by-verse break down of this one......
suav3's shit just didn't wow me at all.......i'm just not impressed with the whole 'toe/foe/though' rhyme scheme......there weren't really any punches that hit anywhere, all the lines just sounded like set-ups for other lines....
Black's verse is structured kind of weird IMO, which fucks with the flow for me.......but his punches are alot better, his scheme is MUCH better, better imagery.....
i'd say that Black took it in all categories.......and trying to sway votes like that is a bitch move.......
|04-30-2008, 09:31 PM||#28|
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black had a great flow but was using simple rhymes
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