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Old 05-05-2008, 01:09 PM   #1
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i could remember 98 my mind was locked in a cage/
my heart was rage,bcuz tha devil i embraced/
the truth was far 4rm me/
i was blind couldnt see/
all my dream was locked wiv a key/
i followed evil/
but GODs epistle keep ringin in my head lyk a whistle/
i couldnt focus on tha facts of life/
bcuz my words were scarlet lyk a swine/
never figured out tha reason why God saved my life/
dat nite i might heve died/
my moms found it hard 2 understand who i was/
life was ruff/
livin da trife life i slanged kurupt/
couldnt trust God/
a youth kurupt wiv wicked mind/
swallowed wiv pride/
all i did in lfe were lyk paragraphs never completed/
so i seek 4 wisdom/
4rm da holy scripture/
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Old 05-06-2008, 01:56 AM   #2
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okay it's dope i can read the passion in your lyrics and you have good form (stanzas are short but has potency keep the progression coming
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Old 05-06-2008, 03:30 AM   #3
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Cool verse and welcome to the forum
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Old 05-06-2008, 09:26 AM   #4
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The spelling tripped me up a bit, but i like what you were saying heartfelt.
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