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Old 05-11-2008, 12:17 AM   #1
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Default MCEES! where is your"Light"?

yoh! bcuz u think u rock chains,ice,4uck bitches and puff L's/
brother, dat means u not superb/
i see u wretched,poor,miserable,blind and naked/
all u do is wicked/
repent! u dont need 2 be stupid/
niggas wivout attitude end their lives in da dark b4 dey see tha light/
i wonder wat hiphop has changed/
if not addin to crime,beef,guns and hate/
only wat sum mcees relate with/
so we came here 2 change it/
u dont need to emulate their ways to change/
wont give up lyk cronite and masta ace who already gave tha fight up/
instead of helping to build these young kurupt mcees up/
wat do u gain in da street fights, tha beefs and tha homocides?/
hip hop was GODs eye/
given to mcees in form of a light/
so we pollute tha light and extinguished tha light/
no wonder,NAS said hiphop is dead/
so wat do you do to revive it back?/
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Old 05-16-2008, 04:50 AM   #2
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why do you use '/' at the end of every line. do you write your rhymes like this -

up jump the funk then fill a bucket with junk/rhymes flying out my mouth like sooper dooper spunk/ya feelin me, ya seeing me so ya''ll believin me/Now watch as I pee on your moms setee/

then split it into lines like this -

up jump the funk then fill a bucket with junk/
rhymes flying out my mouth like sooper dooper spunk/
ya feelin me, ya seeing me so ya''ll believin me/
Now watch as I pee on your moms setee/

I aint taking the pis bro, i was just wondernig cos i've seen a few people use '/' and i was'nt sure why...so maybe you can enlighten me
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