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whers · 04-08-2008, 09:44 PM

Thanks Sleep...You are always welcome...Hahahaha

I personaly like the first bit the most...The Sylar part.

whers · 04-12-2008, 03:24 PM

Whers Moves Incognito...Disapear Like Hiero
To Another Time Zone...Fuck Anyone Who Sits On A Thrown
Servants In Heaven Kings In Hell
Merchants Of Seven Ring The Bells
Open You'r 3rd Eye Like A Tuatara
Move As Swift As Cheetara
Ya'll Get Blown Like Pearl Harbor
I've Read The Unfallable Parables Of The Guidence To Violence
And Granduated Top Of My Class...The Highest
The Sorrow Groans Of Hollow Bones
Trapped In Chains...Survivor Of Pain
Like Braveheart Let Freedom Reign
Father Of Time As Old As Crime...The Hell's Winter Sign
The Mind Of Sylar...I Know How Things Work...Designed To Hurt
You Be Wishing I Catch Glimpse Of A Cheerleaders Skirt
I Throw Darts Like Van Barneveld With The Power Of Gargamel
I Was Bought By The Omen To Bring Forth The Poems...Approach If You Dare
I'm Against The Grain Like A Right-Handed Polar Bear
Do You Allow Suffering Or Stop Care ?
Keep For Yourself Or Share ?
Never Been A Pro...More Like A Virtuoso...Puppet Master Like Gepetto...
Stromboli Unholy Matrimony With Beheadings At The Wedding
The Man With 3 Arms And No Eyes Refuses To Die
300 = This Is Where We Fight...And Where They Die...Wanna Try ?
I Make You Fly...Like Nathan Petrelli Or Vultures In The Serengeti
I'm Cerebral...Stand Tall As Gothic Cathedrals And Steeples Of Evil I See Dead People
Laughing All The Way To The Bank With An Oxygen Tank
Bring Who You Want To Send...This Is No Country For Old Men

D-Infinite · 04-13-2008, 04:48 AM

An observational incidence, like Christ in his time
My defined sequential rhymes proceed to splice your enzymes
I stand alone, monolith, “2001: A Space Odyssey”
Society of the cavemen, cowering & surrounding me
There’s bound to be sounds to see, your psyche be floundering
Thunderous echoes with “In The Hall Of The Mountain King”
So deep, crush any mic presence; radios trace me
At subterranean levels, so much as sight reverence
My inner devil’s an advocate on behalf of the mind
Intensive blast of due time, syntax of drastic designs
Plasticine knives form a PICKET FENCE; oppose my double blade
Transcend the hands of God, with the wicked vengeance
The cutting edge, pledging the drunken drawl, inebriated
Incidental dominance means your fall’s alleviated
Homicide of needless risk echoes, reverberates
The terror harmonizes to whatever the murder takes
Present as a force on the five levels of consciousness
Never leave my justice to thrive, revel on consequence
Incisions to the rap abdomen, a dialectic
C-Section, words a blessing, best to infer confessing
Criminology, mixing Henney, tonic, linguistics
My verbal injection brings semiotic specifics
Explicitly, I'm moving throughout the industry
At the speed of sound or light, profound with might
I exist to expound your sight

OTB · 04-13-2008, 07:32 AM

servants in heaven kingz in hell
merchants of 7 ring the bellz

^high level poetry whers, mad props

D-Infinite · 04-13-2008, 07:51 AM

OTB what you think of my drop? any good?

OTB · 04-13-2008, 08:24 AM

yeah D-

sounded like a drunken freestyle on a winter street corner and you got a dull knife in one hand, a bottle of Hen in the other hand, and an official pocketbook on chemistry tucked inside your hoodie-

word, it waz abstract, choppy, yet comez at you precise and clear sometimez too-
i enjoyed the rhythym of it-

peace-

D-Infinite · 04-13-2008, 08:40 AM

thanks fam, thats the kinda ish i was going for, some random flowing, stream of consciousness shit, puffin blunts on a cold corner rambling out some dartz!

Sleep Sinatra · 04-17-2008, 03:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by whers

I Was Bought By The Omen To Bring Forth The Poems...Approach If You Dare
I'm Against The Grain Like A Right-Handed Polar Bear
Do You Allow Suffering Or Stop Care ?
Keep For Yourself Or Share ?
Never Been A Pro...More Like A Virtuoso...Puppet Master Like Gepetto...
Stromboli Unholy Matrimony With Beheadings At The Wedding
The Man With 3 Arms And No Eyes Refuses To Die
300 = This Is Where We Fight...And Where They Die...Wanna Try ?
I Make You Fly...Like Nathan Petrelli Or Vultures In The Serengeti
I'm Cerebral...Stand Tall As Gothic Cathedrals And Steeples Of Evil I See Dead People
Laughing All The Way To The Bank With An Oxygen Tank
Bring Who You Want To Send...This Is No Country For Old Men

fuckin ill....i can tell u put mad thought into ur rimes, the wordplay and symbolism are crazy,good shit whers

whers · 04-17-2008, 03:48 PM

Thanks Sleep...
Yeah once in a blue moon I will write a verse.
Art is my real passion but I like this too.

Thanks for the comment.

1

Enemy Combatant · 04-17-2008, 06:21 PM

oretty dope stuff, good wordplay n flow...i would like to see something from you where you stick to a certain concept or topic...

whers · 04-18-2008, 02:41 AM

Cheers^
I'll work on that...

MX1 · 04-25-2008, 02:03 PM

damn, that shits nice

you got some ill lines in there..good shit

Ritter · 06-01-2008, 03:35 PM

whers, my dude that is real sick...

Quote:

Originally Posted by whers

Laughing All The Way To The Bank With An Oxygen Tank
Bring Who You Want To Send...This Is No Country For Old Men

Keep it going my man.

Lil' Ruger · 06-01-2008, 04:05 PM

so do i just jump in the cypher you kno do it like this
or do i light a dutch and raise the blakk fist
im at this rhymes pin point every continent like an atlas
Demonic smokin chronic gate keep like the nigga from stetsasonic
hang wit niggas who throw it up like vomit
severe punishment chug poisonous tonics
and fukkin wit RazZ-P is futal
the rhymes i spit will burn out ya fukkin pupils
ya funeral im at it leave ya whole face open like the casket
they call me A SON but im really a DIRT BASTARD

04-08-2008, 09:44 PM	#16
whers Crash You In The Clouds! Join Date: May 2007 Location: Regenerating Age: 28 Posts: 8,802 Rep Power: 37	Thanks Sleep...You are always welcome...Hahahaha I personaly like the first bit the most...The Sylar part. __________________ ""

04-12-2008, 03:24 PM	#17
whers Crash You In The Clouds! Join Date: May 2007 Location: Regenerating Age: 28 Posts: 8,802 Rep Power: 37	Whers Moves Incognito...Disapear Like Hiero To Another Time Zone...Fuck Anyone Who Sits On A Thrown Servants In Heaven Kings In Hell Merchants Of Seven Ring The Bells Open You'r 3rd Eye Like A Tuatara Move As Swift As Cheetara Ya'll Get Blown Like Pearl Harbor I've Read The Unfallable Parables Of The Guidence To Violence And Granduated Top Of My Class...The Highest The Sorrow Groans Of Hollow Bones Trapped In Chains...Survivor Of Pain Like Braveheart Let Freedom Reign Father Of Time As Old As Crime...The Hell's Winter Sign The Mind Of Sylar...I Know How Things Work...Designed To Hurt You Be Wishing I Catch Glimpse Of A Cheerleaders Skirt I Throw Darts Like Van Barneveld With The Power Of Gargamel I Was Bought By The Omen To Bring Forth The Poems...Approach If You Dare I'm Against The Grain Like A Right-Handed Polar Bear Do You Allow Suffering Or Stop Care ? Keep For Yourself Or Share ? Never Been A Pro...More Like A Virtuoso...Puppet Master Like Gepetto... Stromboli Unholy Matrimony With Beheadings At The Wedding The Man With 3 Arms And No Eyes Refuses To Die 300 = This Is Where We Fight...And Where They Die...Wanna Try ? I Make You Fly...Like Nathan Petrelli Or Vultures In The Serengeti I'm Cerebral...Stand Tall As Gothic Cathedrals And Steeples Of Evil I See Dead People Laughing All The Way To The Bank With An Oxygen Tank Bring Who You Want To Send...This Is No Country For Old Men __________________ "" Last edited by whers; 04-12-2008 at 04:23 PM.

04-17-2008, 03:48 PM	#24
whers Crash You In The Clouds! Join Date: May 2007 Location: Regenerating Age: 28 Posts: 8,802 Rep Power: 37	Thanks Sleep... Yeah once in a blue moon I will write a verse. Art is my real passion but I like this too. Thanks for the comment. 1 __________________ ""

04-17-2008, 06:21 PM	#25
Enemy Combatant MVP Of The Planet Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Yay Area Age: 32 Posts: 83 Rep Power: 0	oretty dope stuff, good wordplay n flow...i would like to see something from you where you stick to a certain concept or topic... __________________ BABYLON SOON FALL "Ya see, I'm a Peaceful man, until you threaten my peace And if you mess with my Family, then I'm gettin' my piece"

04-18-2008, 02:41 AM	#26
whers Crash You In The Clouds! Join Date: May 2007 Location: Regenerating Age: 28 Posts: 8,802 Rep Power: 37	Cheers^ I'll work on that... __________________ ""

04-13-2008, 04:48 AM	#18
D-Infinite Fight The Power Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Sydney, Australia Age: 23 Posts: 651 Rep Power: 0	An observational incidence, like Christ in his time My defined sequential rhymes proceed to splice your enzymes I stand alone, monolith, “2001: A Space Odyssey” Society of the cavemen, cowering & surrounding me There’s bound to be sounds to see, your psyche be floundering Thunderous echoes with “In The Hall Of The Mountain King” So deep, crush any mic presence; radios trace me At subterranean levels, so much as sight reverence My inner devil’s an advocate on behalf of the mind Intensive blast of due time, syntax of drastic designs Plasticine knives form a PICKET FENCE; oppose my double blade Transcend the hands of God, with the wicked vengeance The cutting edge, pledging the drunken drawl, inebriated Incidental dominance means your fall’s alleviated Homicide of needless risk echoes, reverberates The terror harmonizes to whatever the murder takes Present as a force on the five levels of consciousness Never leave my justice to thrive, revel on consequence Incisions to the rap abdomen, a dialectic C-Section, words a blessing, best to infer confessing Criminology, mixing Henney, tonic, linguistics My verbal injection brings semiotic specifics Explicitly, I'm moving throughout the industry At the speed of sound or light, profound with might I exist to expound your sight

04-13-2008, 07:32 AM	#19
OTB LIVE AND UNCUT Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: BEHIND SECTION 9 CATHEDRAL'S STAINED GLASS Posts: 1,534 Rep Power: 0	servants in heaven kingz in hell merchants of 7 ring the bellz ^high level poetry whers, mad props

04-13-2008, 07:51 AM	#20
D-Infinite Fight The Power Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Sydney, Australia Age: 23 Posts: 651 Rep Power: 0	OTB what you think of my drop? any good?

04-13-2008, 08:24 AM	#21
OTB LIVE AND UNCUT Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: BEHIND SECTION 9 CATHEDRAL'S STAINED GLASS Posts: 1,534 Rep Power: 0	yeah D- sounded like a drunken freestyle on a winter street corner and you got a dull knife in one hand, a bottle of Hen in the other hand, and an official pocketbook on chemistry tucked inside your hoodie- word, it waz abstract, choppy, yet comez at you precise and clear sometimez too- i enjoyed the rhythym of it- peace-

04-13-2008, 08:40 AM	#22
D-Infinite Fight The Power Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Sydney, Australia Age: 23 Posts: 651 Rep Power: 0	thanks fam, thats the kinda ish i was going for, some random flowing, stream of consciousness shit, puffin blunts on a cold corner rambling out some dartz!

04-25-2008, 02:03 PM	#27
MX1 R.I.P. Big L Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: 718 area Brooklyn, New York Age: 23 Posts: 649 Rep Power: 0	damn, that shits nice you got some ill lines in there..good shit __________________ no more albums like the 36 no more

06-01-2008, 04:05 PM	#29
Lil' Ruger Fukkin Vet!!!! Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: New London CT Crystal Ave niggas Age: 20 Posts: 7,571 Rep Power: 0	so do i just jump in the cypher you kno do it like this or do i light a dutch and raise the blakk fist im at this rhymes pin point every continent like an atlas Demonic smokin chronic gate keep like the nigga from stetsasonic hang wit niggas who throw it up like vomit severe punishment chug poisonous tonics and fukkin wit RazZ-P is futal the rhymes i spit will burn out ya fukkin pupils ya funeral im at it leave ya whole face open like the casket they call me A SON but im really a DIRT BASTARD __________________ Killbot Beats 2008 NIGGGAAAAAAAAA http://www.soundclick.com/bands/defa...?bandID=842145 Lawrlz Ya Sniffs??? "we laptop nigga, thugs on a computer." -TheShaolinAssassin

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