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08-23-2005, 01:53 PM
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Lord of the Perfect Black
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Willie Lynch
They label me a danger
Kidnapped to this land as a stranger Hate made me hate myself I'm filled with anger Less than 30 years ago a noose was my hanger Sane, I'm productive Insane, I'm a banger I'm a late night street walker, victim stalker Blue uniform with a badge body chalker B-Boy body rocker, mason, carpenter and caulker Cock blocker, knock you off your rocker Black steel cocker, 15 inch subwoofer beat knocker Green leaf sparker, the color of teeth tarter Through shades darker than tar shit talker Authored Make Me Wanna Holler Frequent the nastiest clubs clutching sweaty dollars A funeral parlor body hauler Philosopher, teacher, and scholar No good dirty dog, consider my own child a bother Wise grandfather, 10 grand a man popper I'll pimp your daughter Ask me 'Why?' I'll reply, "I can't stop her!" They label me a danger Kidnapped to this land as a stranger Hate made me hate myself I'm filled with anger Less than 30 years ago a noose was my hanger Sane, I'm productive Insane, I'm a banger I'm brutally honest, a damn liar Colder than dry ice Touch me, you'll burn from my fire Use legal means for more cheddar Illiterate, I don't know no letters Go in debt for a Roc a Fella black and gold sweater Use illegal means for more chedder Over 30, but a child, I don't know no better A Muhammad and Jesus follower Down with the swine, in the slop wallower Tell me any bullshit swallower Secretary of State, master of my fate Win any debate, calm, irate God, king, and savage, innate Sold out my family for the cabbage and ate News anchor, couch potato, remote channel changer Eagle and birdie shooter under par In any sport, TV show, or movie, I'm a star They label me a danger Kidnapped to this land as a stranger Hate made me hate myself I'm filled with anger Less than 30 years ago a noose was my hanger Sane, I'm productive Insane, I'm a banger I'm a nerd, jock and activist Gangster rapper and raptivist Follow anyone, leader and catalyst War monger and pacifist A 22 inch rim sit uponer Show me a Black woman I'll call her a bitch and shit upon her A virgin, a degenerate, deviant splurgin Do anything at my peer group's urgin Adolescent with testosterone surgin Separated Siamese twins joined at the head Supreme surgeon Body builder, genius IQ, leave you bewildered Live the high life like Miller Ultimate master Black man killer Cell dwella, from blue black to high yella A plus student, I'm stella Rob you at an automatic tella psychological warfare works I'm here to tell ya It wasn't a failure They label me a danger Kidnapped to this land as a stranger Hate made me hate myself I'm filled with anger Less than 30 years ago a noose was my hanger Sane, I'm productive Insane, I'm a banger
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08-23-2005, 03:32 PM
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The Predator
Join Date: Jun 2005
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Re: Willie Lynch
ok i swear i didn't bit this off you, i figured i would bring it to your attention
before anyone else runs their fingers, but i did something similar to your chorus thing.. me "you lone ranger/ i look at you like a hostile stranger/ steppin' in my direction is heading into danger/ don't anger the headless horseman" we did it in the same day and it's pretty strange aye? word n nice verses dun peace OmO < Idiom
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08-23-2005, 09:56 PM
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Secret Teachings
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Re: Willie Lynch
born ruler...some serious fire ....
oh and Idiom didnt bite before people start hate
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08-24-2005, 07:06 AM
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Taoist Saint
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Re: Willie Lynch
Your flow and lyrical content seems to be based on the rhyme of the verse. You have to make it flow with the rhyme you have in mind (that's how this verse appears like). You have a certain rhythm which you worked with from the start of the verse and tried to keep it till the end of the verse. And you lyrical content needs to improve- but with this verse you can almost get away with it cause fo the title you gave it.Work on you style though.
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