State of the World

[THE MASON]

Poisonous poems present powerful aggression
it may sound like i use big words to gain your attention
naw kid, it puts you the perfect direction
correction, it helps guide and lead
each and every little seed,
proceed with your evil deeds, fuel to the fire feeds
oxygen for the toxins to breathe in for the next gen - eration
contemplatin about being part of corporerate enslavin
its amazin how they still view the television
they need to get they minds un twisted,
before they can speak from a position
your opinion, is null and void
if your only information, is based on the media they destroyed
and every station, falsifies or exaggerates events complex reporters paranoid


this is the state the we live in, not much sooner
will we seek critical condition
while other sit on the sidelines bitchin
others are striving to make a difference
its different, but it works, the only people that it hurts
is the one doing the acts, for that, we just laugh
how is this funny young dunny?
when people cant eat, but we as people thrive on money
what happened to manage you own land?
putting food and clothes in your own hands?
its gone and never will it be back, for human nature is never to counter react
lifes to simple and plain, when hardships come, we just ask the next man
so on and so on, laziness keeps grow on and grow on
so if you approach me makes sure you ready to spare with a mental atomic bomb

this is.... my.. poetic justice
sink mothafuckas like sea ships
in my own views i seek bliss
self destruct if i ever feel a sense of ignorance
i have seen hell at a glance
me and the lady of death even shared one dance
but it CANT and it WONT
happen till im ready and when i die, im gonna do it laughin
my lifes my vessel and im the only capitian
a caption appears over my head
soul controller approach with caution, or end up dead
but i tryna say im a bad mothafucka, i got a bad mouth like
a badass trucka, and i will swing on you suckas
but i got honour, so i wont pull a gun on you duckas
unless you threaten my family membas
then you feel it get cold as Canadian decembers
winter as hell freezes ova
i move on you bastards like a king cobra

[SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS]

yo bronze all this need is a chorus n this would be a dope song

[THE MASON]

thanks Sheep

i was thinkin of putting it down, i need to work on my chorus skills, never really done that many lol

[SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS]

Originally Posted by Bronze Feet

thanks Sheep

i was thinkin of putting it down, i need to work on my chorus skills, never really done that many lol

yeah i have problems their too but i try 2 make it fight the song cuz most people don't memorize lyrics they memorize the chrous, that's why swagger like us is such a huge song cuz of the chrous

[THE MASON]

word true

usually the first thing they listen for, to me a chorus is just like a filler but i understand there use, imma work on one for this track tho

[J.T.S.]

Poisonous poems present powerful aggression
it may sound like i use big words to gain your attention
naw kid, it puts you the perfect direction
correction, it helps guide and lead
each and every little seed,
proceed with your evil deeds, fuel to the fire feeds
oxygen for the toxins to breathe in for the next gen - eration
contemplatin about being part of corporerate enslavin
its amazin how they still view the television
they need to get they minds un twisted,
before they can speak from a position
your opinion, is null and void
if your only information, is based on the media they destroyed
and every station, falsifies or exaggerates events complex reporters paranoid

speechless

[THE MASON]

Thanks J