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Riddlez · 01-27-2009, 07:01 AM

Sup All ... been a while since ive put something 2gether, so little quick freestyle ... please let me know what u think. Peace !

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Vision of a Serpent
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Intro ...

Yo, Creation a big bang,
synchronized angle river dance
water in flow trance
separate .. the earth .. by the border of the atlas
leave man to find the balance ... but hah, NO CHANCE !

yo ! check"heard" ...
chess board battle play the economy teler~kinesis
countries fall, the king control the pillars, the marble pieces
re quote the divine thesis and erase the status of Jesus
and replace with corrupt leaders, dropping bombs on unborn fetus
then distract us and tease us, green, white and pink bits to please us
then feed us, lies fried with blood of a swine stirred with a monkey spine
to force us to incline to the brain of reptile back to the pyramids of the Nile
slavery of the pheroes, no heroes or staffs to split the social murals
illusions vale the iris from seeing the virus that spreads within the soul of the Osirus
spiritual pirates hijacking the ship of pious and the door of the city of knowledge written on papyrus
replaced with tubes or photons bombed reflecting their corrupt views
etching images into the skull of the youth via shows and cartoons
truth to a minimal while falsehood subliminal
the horn of the devils penetrate the soul of the political criminal
pierce through their conscious, hands, feet and third eye temple
tie the strings to the orifices and watch then dance speeches to the masters cymbal
the symbol ? simple, left view float like a grape above the lips and the dimple
powered by the forces, rearrange natural sources in the form of miracle,
allude the cynical by rearranging the tables in the fusion of the periodics
new elements luminate the sight of the blind with vision of the aquatics
never still but full of ripples so u never see your true image as a reflection of the sermon
the mirror has been shattered, trapped in slit in the eye of the vision of a serpent !

Peace Out
Riddlez

BornPower · 01-28-2009, 02:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Riddlez

re quote the divine thesis and erase the status of Jesus
and replace with corrupt leaders, dropping bombs on unborn fetus
then distract us and tease us, green, white and pink bits to please us

illusions vale the iris from seeing the virus that spreads within the soul of the Osirus
spiritual pirates hijacking the ship of pious and the door of the city of knowledge written on papyrus
replaced with tubes or photons bombed reflecting their corrupt views
etching images into the skull of the youth via shows and cartoons
truth to a minimal while falsehood subliminal
the horn of the devils penetrate the soul of the political criminal
pierce through their conscious, hands, feet and third eye temple
tie the strings to the orifices and watch then dance speeches to the masters cymbal
the symbol ? simple, left view float like a grape above the lips and the dimple
powered by the forces, rearrange natural sources in the form of miracle,
allude the cynical by rearranging the tables in the fusion of the periodics
new elements luminate the sight of the blind with vision of the aquatics
never still but full of ripples so u never see your true image as a reflection of the sermon
the mirror has been shattered, trapped in slit in the eye of the vision of a serpent !

I was gonna try to dissect this and just highlight the lines I like the most, but most of this is something I would call to anotherz attentiona as an example of greatness. THIS is ur freestyle? Get a thread up couzin and see the gods manifest with u.

Riddlez · 01-29-2009, 05:35 AM

Sup 5KutSkeleton

Thanx for the feedback brother ... yeah its been about 5 years since i last wrote something. Felt like writing so just got on and thought id post something up 2 c ppls feedback/comments/criticisms, u know just 2 get back into the swing of things !

Once again, thanx for the heads up cuz, will definitely encourage me 2 get back into dropping some more rhymes

Peace Out
Riddlez

J.T.S. · 01-29-2009, 10:16 AM

synchronized angle river dance
water in flow trance
chess board battle play the economy teler~kinesis
countries fall, the king control the pillars, the marble pieces
re quote the divine thesis and erase the status of Jesus
and replace with corrupt leaders, dropping bombs on unborn fetus
then distract us and tease us, green, white and pink bits to please us
then feed us, lies fried with blood of a swine stirred with a monkey spine
to force us to incline to the brain of reptile back to the pyramids of the Nile
slavery of the pheroes, no heroes or staffs to split the social murals
illusions vale the iris from seeing the virus that spreads within the soul of the Osirus
spiritual pirates hijacking the ship of pious and the door of the city

DOPE

Riddlez · 01-30-2009, 09:16 AM

Sup J.T.S

Thanx for the feedback. u picked alot of my fav lines

Peace Out
Riddlez

Riddlez · 02-06-2009, 06:57 PM

No More feedback ??? man this forum has changes since 2003 ! ppl used 2 give both good and bad feedback to help one develop !

BornPower · 02-09-2009, 01:54 PM

not a lotta feed nowadayz sun. itz division in its longest form, chargin forward in this empty and lawless forum...

01-27-2009, 07:01 AM	#1
Riddlez Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: The Uncharted Mind Posts: 12 Rep Power: 0	Vision of a Serpent ! Sup All ... been a while since ive put something 2gether, so little quick freestyle ... please let me know what u think. Peace ! ============== Vision of a Serpent ============== Intro ... Yo, Creation a big bang, synchronized angle river dance water in flow trance separate .. the earth .. by the border of the atlas leave man to find the balance ... but hah, NO CHANCE ! yo ! check"heard" ... chess board battle play the economy teler~kinesis countries fall, the king control the pillars, the marble pieces re quote the divine thesis and erase the status of Jesus and replace with corrupt leaders, dropping bombs on unborn fetus then distract us and tease us, green, white and pink bits to please us then feed us, lies fried with blood of a swine stirred with a monkey spine to force us to incline to the brain of reptile back to the pyramids of the Nile slavery of the pheroes, no heroes or staffs to split the social murals illusions vale the iris from seeing the virus that spreads within the soul of the Osirus spiritual pirates hijacking the ship of pious and the door of the city of knowledge written on papyrus replaced with tubes or photons bombed reflecting their corrupt views etching images into the skull of the youth via shows and cartoons truth to a minimal while falsehood subliminal the horn of the devils penetrate the soul of the political criminal pierce through their conscious, hands, feet and third eye temple tie the strings to the orifices and watch then dance speeches to the masters cymbal the symbol ? simple, left view float like a grape above the lips and the dimple powered by the forces, rearrange natural sources in the form of miracle, allude the cynical by rearranging the tables in the fusion of the periodics new elements luminate the sight of the blind with vision of the aquatics never still but full of ripples so u never see your true image as a reflection of the sermon the mirror has been shattered, trapped in slit in the eye of the vision of a serpent ! Peace Out Riddlez __________________ Who is the Coloured Man ? Who is the Original ? Who is the Bio-Chemical ? Who is the Graphted Digital ! Last edited by Riddlez; 01-27-2009 at 07:06 AM.

01-29-2009, 05:35 AM	#3
Riddlez Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: The Uncharted Mind Posts: 12 Rep Power: 0	Sup 5KutSkeleton Thanx for the feedback brother ... yeah its been about 5 years since i last wrote something. Felt like writing so just got on and thought id post something up 2 c ppls feedback/comments/criticisms, u know just 2 get back into the swing of things ! Once again, thanx for the heads up cuz, will definitely encourage me 2 get back into dropping some more rhymes Peace Out Riddlez __________________ Who is the Coloured Man ? Who is the Original ? Who is the Bio-Chemical ? Who is the Graphted Digital !

01-29-2009, 10:16 AM	#4
J.T.S. God Of WAr Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 4,044 Rep Power: 25	synchronized angle river dance water in flow trance chess board battle play the economy teler~kinesis countries fall, the king control the pillars, the marble pieces re quote the divine thesis and erase the status of Jesus and replace with corrupt leaders, dropping bombs on unborn fetus then distract us and tease us, green, white and pink bits to please us then feed us, lies fried with blood of a swine stirred with a monkey spine to force us to incline to the brain of reptile back to the pyramids of the Nile slavery of the pheroes, no heroes or staffs to split the social murals illusions vale the iris from seeing the virus that spreads within the soul of the Osirus spiritual pirates hijacking the ship of pious and the door of the city DOPE __________________ My evidence, my own testament, written on wood Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods Hell razah

01-30-2009, 09:16 AM	#5
Riddlez Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: The Uncharted Mind Posts: 12 Rep Power: 0	Sup J.T.S Thanx for the feedback. u picked alot of my fav lines Peace Out Riddlez __________________ Who is the Coloured Man ? Who is the Original ? Who is the Bio-Chemical ? Who is the Graphted Digital !

02-06-2009, 06:57 PM	#6
Riddlez Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: The Uncharted Mind Posts: 12 Rep Power: 0	No More feedback ??? man this forum has changes since 2003 ! ppl used 2 give both good and bad feedback to help one develop ! __________________ Who is the Coloured Man ? Who is the Original ? Who is the Bio-Chemical ? Who is the Graphted Digital !

02-09-2009, 01:54 PM	#7
BornPower SiferBorn Join Date: May 2006 Location: Souf CHIolin Age: 31 Posts: 1,248 Blog Entries: 27 Rep Power: 15	not a lotta feed nowadayz sun. itz division in its longest form, chargin forward in this empty and lawless forum... __________________ weep for lost babylon, the bleeding god, the forgotten sheep slaughtered in a forest of evil fog bordered by a sea of faults, fleeing mobs turn to see the holocaust and become kings and queens of salt screaming shots, police and chalk, wingless fallen demons walking among us as people... -.5Kut

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