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Coming of Age...
Join Date: Aug 2007
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A recent piece.....criticism is always welcomed...
My bars are harder than marble stained wit the blood of martyrs/ wit bums I barter for gems, in exchange for them, I pen charters/ explainin why men falter, burnin pagan incense on a dead altar/ meanwhile I recite the psalter, standin tall on rocks of Gibraltar/ the author of the third testament, it don't end until I ascend/ no tellin when the devil contend, but my pen will be ready then/ tell a friend, I recommend you extend a hand before you offend/ my phlegm is gems, they condemn what they can't comprehend/ false prophets and preachers pretend, that's the triumph of evil/ ions is feeble, my hustle's a muzzle that makes my silence illegal/ Zionist people shout in defiance against the science of steeples/ my giants is lethal, ridin in Regals wit the pride of lions and eagles/ I’m writin the sequel to Ezekiel, a prophet spittin to dry bones/ my vision is light shown, reflected across different time zones/ of the four corners, blindin the angels, at five different angles/ wit tigers I tangle, it feel good to live in the eye of the bengal/ I wouldn't lie if it's painful, I've become numb from the atrocities/ my acute prophecies mangle, mayn, I try angles like Isosceles/ I'm stoppin these rap dudes who's obtuse and use painful policies/ wit truth I systematically split atoms into mathematical anomalies/ obviously...I'm oblivious to the trivial pursuit of the frivolous/ a criminal subliminalist spittin murder, facin lawsuits and litigants/ this is equivalence to eloquence, elevate my Elohim development/ in cells I was celibate, but my equilibrium equaled an elephant's/ crushin skeleton bones near the angelic hosts' elegant throne's tier/ I go near, just a son of man on earth, but my name is known here/ stabbed the pope wit a chrome spear, then wiped Nina Simone's tears/ ancient vagrants was my old peers while I roamed on the gold sphere...
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courage under fire
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damn!
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bump for this, yo proh u recordin yet or what homie? u NEED to be in the booth man word up, keep blessin
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courage under fire
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yeah P-
how u been g- peace
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Coming of Age...
Join Date: Aug 2007
Location: Sheol
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I have resurrected.....love to all the brothers that have carried the cross here in the temple.
They ask what prison I been in, what I been livin in/ I been on frontlines, pistol grippin for my dominion/ politickin wit this Palestinian, gettin his opinions/ inside of City Market buyin Swishers from a Indian/ ponderin over Levi and Simeon, Nazis and Davidians/ trekking to whatever I may cross along this meridian/ watchin Benny Hinn, considerin his Armenian lineage/ studyin Abyssinians, on the abysmal edge of obsidian/ within Lucifer's reach, I try to teach with each speech/ but it's hard to reach Greeks so I speak to the meek/ the weak take a seat, intrigued by my sleek mystique/ they eat every gem I speak, disguised as concrete meat/ the seeds that I excrete blossom into colossal flora/ meant for the explorers armed wit rockets and Torahs/ angelic auras, lyrical skills able to kill Gomorrahs/ enough piff to fill fedoras, hollows to fill a Taurus/ more squares than Phillip Morris, where killas flourish/ over hills and forests up to the hidden villes of Moorish/ where Moors move their quills in chorus to the cadence/ of black ravens singin a sad song of long gone havens/ for the black slaves in strong bonds of miseducation/ the child makin thongs in Hong Kong for next to nathan/ every Moors' song's long, but is organized and filed/ then compiled for awhile inside my cerebral profile/ thru my larynx turnstile to a door marked "Worthwhile"/ the files emit into spit mixed wit styles so versatile/ verse after verse is dispersed by these sacred means/ all to beguile a child and show him how to chase his dreams... Comments/criticisms are more than welcome....
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Hello, everybody!
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: yes, I has it
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it's all we love on your raps
when are you going to record something?
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courage under fire
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h ha-
spectacularly fascinating P- excellent excellent rhymes- peace-
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Coming of Age...
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Trying to shake the rust off...probably been six months since I picked up a pen. I almost didn't even post this bullshit, but I know the criticism will motivate me to write something worthwhile.
I'm calmly armed upon a threatened farm of carnal Meccans/ dented armor on our chest and arms, my army's sergeants sweatin/ tarnished weapons in my palms, they wet and salt infected/ ready for Karmageddon, spreadin souls upon the lawns of heaven/ we invadin the halls erected tall by the spawns of Nephilim/ callin Tibetan monks to find the flaws in their walls' defenses/ warriors crawlin along the fences that's sprawled along wit trenches/ words of the Law scrawled across helmets so all our jaw's protected/ from the weapons of warfare, the cold stare of Medusa's daughter/ hard enough to induce a slaughter wrought upon Zeus's altar/ I caught her on the trade route without a safe scout or guardian/ partyin her brains out, I left her laid out like a devout Rastafarian/ now Anakim have left the Vatican to collect the bounty on my back/ I left County on the run til my soldiers found me cloudy in Iraq/ fled South where the Saudis crowded around me in unbelief/ how I come from thief to satan’s soldier to turnin over a new leaf/ now I’m chief among killers willin to let blood drop for the pack/ poised to attack and die in combat at the simple drop of a hat/ facin Philistines and knockin em back wit half a sack of arrows/ past the narrow halls of Egypt, tracin back to the blackest Pharaohs...
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Crash You In The Clouds!
Join Date: May 2007
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What !!!!!
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from the weapons of warfare, the cold stare of Medusa's daughter/
hard enough to induce a slaughter wrought upon Zeus's altar/ nice dart Prophet>
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Coming of Age...
Join Date: Aug 2007
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No more argument, this dart is an ardent artistic disarmament/
part call-to-arms, part stark darkness to a Holy Ark parliament/ designed to spark alarm in charlatans, impartin scars to cartilage/ carvin a mark in ya heart so large you could park cars in it/ the carnage is hardened on garden variety garbage and piety/ tied inside the fiery sparks of irony that start in societies/ where heart and sobriety are trumped by lust, anger and greed/ the trifecta of iniquity, ubiquity becomes vacancy and need/ agencies impede, people concede to propaganda academics/ food stamps, section eight and wic til we get overdependant/ a paradoxical epidemic that we spread on to our descendants/ teen women regularly pregnant with yet another ghetto tenant/ so my every sentence is penance, repentance for my disregard/ I know shit gets hard for my babymamas, so in this regard/ I apologize for the hollow lies and all the time in prison yards/ I coulda spent wit my seeds insteada smokin trees and livin hard/ my decisions scarred my kids, forced to live years fatherless/ my hard ass stayed down, had to drown to learn what water is/ intolerance for authority forcin me to continue the cycle/ listen to Michael, it ain’t no sunshine but my vision is viable/ driven to rifles, prison and Bibles, arisen as titles in my journal/ givin kernals of truth in the booth against hell’s eternal inferno/ me and my colonels is nocturnal, night owls buyin White Owls/ goons with gold grills and scowls hidden under white towels/ tryin to escape Sodom before autumn, it’s cold at the bottom/ downtrodden and rotten, my belief’s become old and forgotten/ I’m hopin I gotten further from the burdens that been searchin me/ only God can judge me but I’m scared what will his verdict be... |
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PUTYOMONEYWHEREYOMOUTHIZ
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CRAAAAAAAAAZYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY shit!
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wish i could criticize..
lyrics were great.. didn't want to stop reading it. |
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Crazy man.
If you need some beats... |
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