Sicka? Skale? Xtadas?

[arcane]

I type against my better judgement, I'm feeling ashamed/
Like I'm the world's fastest man, at the Paralympic Games,/
Who wins the race laughing and taunting the lame,/
Pushes handi-dudes over and revels in fame./
Fuck "everybody wins", I take the medal and bounce/
Cuz normal people know it's only winning that counts./
Not to worry though, I'll make him happy and all/
Here's some brand new Crayolas and a big white wall./
I just might fall/ to Hell for making fun of his defects/
Plus it seems he's threatening to come after me next/
Talking tough like he's sliced a thousand emcees' necks/
It's hard to feel pain though when all I can see's text/
I crack up at 'net thugs who murder in writing/
While each word I type sends you further in hiding/
Not for fear of pain, but of being straight clowned on/
Watch his eyes folks... yep! Water works now on....

[TeknicelStylez]

ok arcane won for obvious reasons

my vote....

Good battle

[arcane]

Originally Posted by TeknicelStylez

Dupreez got lifted, Idk, why he even battles. Good shit mang, but don't get your head suped, you lacking in shit like multis.

If that last bit was directed at me, I'm well aware that I don't use a lot of multis... I feel like I'm more effective in content. I could water down the punches and try and hit with more multis, but I'm out more for comedy than anything.

[Dupreez]

Originally Posted by TeknicelStylez

Shutup nerd and its fanatic learn how to read.

Its a real pit about you. But anyway I knew it was fanatic but MR Wu Fantastic sounded more apropiate. "Mr Wu-fanatic" like toy guns never a problem in plastic.

Oh yeah and calling me a nerd? splish splash dickface

[Dupreez]

Originally Posted by arcane

I type against my better judgement, I'm feeling ashamed/
Like I'm the world's fastest man, at the Paralympic Games,/
Who wins the race laughing and taunting the lame,/
Pushes handi-dudes over and revels in fame./
Fuck "everybody wins", I take the medal and bounce/
Cuz normal people know it's only winning that counts./
Not to worry though, I'll make him happy and all/
Here's some brand new Crayolas and a big white wall./
I just might fall/ to Hell for making fun of his defects/
Plus it seems he's threatening to come after me next/
Talking tough like he's sliced a thousand emcees' necks/
It's hard to feel pain though when all I can see's text/
I crack up at 'net thugs who murder in writing/
While each word I type sends you further in hiding/
Not for fear of pain, but of being straight clowned on/
Watch his eyes folks... yep! Water works now on....

Yo arcane looks like you won ima respond soon (Just cause i can). But anyway props to you man you came with an unplayable style. Nice one.

Peace

This my edit. My bad just read the rules only two rounds. Well infact thats just aswell. We can battle again after I've had some practice. peace......

[MASTER PAI MEI]

Arcane Wins hands down!!

[TeknicelStylez]

Originally Posted by arcane

If that last bit was directed at me, I'm well aware that I don't use a lot of multis... I feel like I'm more effective in content. I could water down the punches and try and hit with more multis, but I'm out more for comedy than anything.

I feel you dawg, but you don't gotta water it down you just hit with both properly.

[Sicka than aidZ]

Originally Posted by TeknicelStylez

Dupreez got lifted, Idk, why he even battles. Good shit mang, but don't get your head suped, you lacking in shit like multis.

dupreez drops hot shit, just not in this thread. fuck it tho, both of em were corny but i gotta say arcane

arcane=1

[Sicka than aidZ]

Originally Posted by Dupreez

So what up arcane you wanna drop again or let me practice some more?

And yo if you wanna post a comment then do so but aint nothing fly about cheap shots (eg. tecknicelystylez) Thats a fifty thing we in Wu-corp right here.

Peace........

that wasnt a cheap shot, kinda rude but yo, dont let it bother you.
peace

[Dupreez]

Originally Posted by Sicka Than Aidz

that wasnt a cheap shot, kinda rude but yo, dont let it bother you.
peace

Word Sicka, no offence taken. Arcane for sure won that one fair and square.

Peace........

[hollywoodrealty]

see i gotta dissagree with everyone, there wasnt anything spectacular in arcane's rhymes, they were just more organized, but dupreez shit was kinda crazy, off rhytem, but if u read it to a beat, it swings well, and come on, if u people dont know what a swallow is, thats not his fault, homeboy lives in africa, so whats regular to him is unusual to us, so u gotta read deeper into his shit, but i mean this wasnt uneven, arcane did win, but ya'll making it seem like dupreez drown, when i think he faught a good battle, and jumped in blindfolded not even knowing how good or bad arcane is, so u gotta give dupreez props for that, but anyways arcane wins, peace

[arcane]

Originally Posted by Sicka Than Aidz

dupreez drops hot shit, just not in this thread. fuck it tho, both of em were corny but i gotta say arcane

arcane=1

See, this is interesting... I've had my style critiqued as "corny" before, and I'm always confused by that. Obviously I play the sarcasm angle when I write, trying to go for funny punch lines more than anything. Is that what makes it corny? What isn't corny? Do I have to say things like "I'll do this and this to you", or "I'll kill you in way number 1,001", or my personal favourite "You suck cock for this and this reason". All that "kill you" and "fag" shit is so tired... The best battlers out there have a lot of wit, which is something very absent in the style of writing I just described. I guess I'd rather err on the side of corny.

Peace. Thanks for dropping comments.