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H.R. Puffinstuff
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beautifulrock back, observing the block What's new? Bitches and faggots alike, I'm talkin' to you You can sell your pussy or work at Pizza Hut Be dead ass broke, or be fatherfucking slut What I'm sayin' hun is open those fine ass legs and I'ma try to fertilize one of those eggs Leave you a baby, then take off all shady like a thief in the night, prowling for new ladies I'm not crazy, that name I gave you ain't real and who gives a dog humping fuck what you feel Just say peace hun, light up and beast one aiight When the feast comes, I'ma leave no crumbs in si-ight I'm monstrous metaphorically no nonsense How do you stop a motherfucker with literally no conscience I'm obnoxious, stomp your kids' toys with my galoshes Drop hints to your wife that I wanna slobb'er tits Motorboat shit, open her panties, deposit crabs Next day, you scratch your balls and I laugh Guess what, I'm also your long lost dad Fuckin' since I was 12, never wearin' a bag Sure I got my problems, So what's it to you? You haven't a clue, STOP MASTURBATING WHEN I'M TALKIN' TO YOU!!!! Put the dick down and pay attention, get off the porn cause I'ma bout to turn it around on you, go knowledge born These streets is literally crumbling, the infrastructure needs to be redone and they know it, time's up, destructor Is waiting at the starting gates, new cities to make Utopia State, Europa hoping and knowing the scope is great Four steeds, Four colors, no time left, to be open and frank, I know what you're thinking, I know what you're hoping I know it sucks, things were going so great, what's Up? Why the change all of a sudden, have we over runneth cup? It was your decision, Don't look around, I'm pointing at you Always looking all innocent, citizens, red white and blue We allowed an empire to appear before our eyes, blind to a military industrial complex without a mind Crazier than I, lost without a map, direction-less Overreacting greatly by the slightest stress Through the saloon door, shooting a man without a weapon Am I stepping out a line? I was talkin' Iraq if you're guessin' Shock and Awe, Ha, hawkish blah blah blah, Naw son Don't do it like that, you killed kids dun. and not just one, you literally murdered tons Innocent to the lies and betrayal, like they knew? they would be tied to the tracks when the train came through Afghanis hiding in rocks Blame the game on who? A dick started this war, but Obama ain't through Doubling troops to win an unwinnable war, you been there before You know in 84 when you made the Russians poor That'll get done by Karzai going the dialog route Taliban will still be there, they took enough loot Out of the poppy fields, DEA knows the deal They watched the CIA home made real from Laos playing a glockenspiel In Vietnam, when the war was only about profits, It still is These niggas got deep pockets, I'm just saying, Lil' Bis- Lil shakedown, Lil hun'ned here and there, killing rate unfair But who cares, they don't have credit cards there And speaking of credit, what about China? Do we default on our loan, like a little vagina? Do we change the currency, call it Amero? New dinero Have all the mexicans sayin' te quiero Buenos noches hace viento en la Kans-ass The place where your tornado insurance claims get passed Over, HA HA Fucked and denied, we lied and then we watched our profit margin go sky high We gave out hefty bonuses to all of these guys Bentleys, Royce, Mercedes, those the whips that thieves drive They'll get theirs though, they won't capitalize long, civil war poor lynch, bottom line marginalized Then Israel will hit Iran, Syria too and we'll be forced to fucking interlude Russia will join the fight China too and a thousand missiles will fly and it'll all be through Don't say I didn't warn you.
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Wow....all i can say is wow....that was good
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These streets is literally crumbling, the infrastructure
needs to be redone and they know it, time's up, destructor Is waiting at the starting gates, new cities to make Utopia State, Europa hoping and knowing the scope is great Four steeds, Four colors, no time left, to be open and frank, I know what you're thinking, I know what you're hoping I know it sucks, things were going so great, what's Up? Why the change all of a sudden, have we over runneth cup? It was your decision, Don't look around, I'm pointing at you Always looking all innocent, citizens, red white and blue Lil shakedown, Lil hun'ned here and there, killing rate unfair But who cares, they don't have credit cards there And speaking of credit, what about China? Do we default on our loan, like a little vagina? Do we change the currency, call it Amero? New dinero Have all the mexicans sayin' te quiero Buenos noches hace viento en la Kans-ass The place where your tornado insurance claims get passed Over, HA HA Fucked and denied, we lied and then we watched our profit margin go sky high We gave out hefty bonuses to all of these guys Bentleys, Royce, Mercedes, those the whips that thieves drive They'll get theirs though, they won't capitalize long, civil war poor lynch, bottom line marginalized here is a five star verse Man you firing some heat what caused the spark??
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H.R. Puffinstuff
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^^^Wu-Massacre, I'm not kidding, listened to it twice and wrote this shit.
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H.R. Puffinstuff
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The concept here is the way to get to people in this country is to be as vulgar as possible, and then once you have them woken up, drop some knowledge and get heads to recognize the truth. It's also an oxymoronical piece on the one hand being misanthropic, on the other being stern but sympathetic. I used multi-syllabic rhyme structure and used every long and short tense to conclude the bars. I think it came out right and I'm happy with the length.
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