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I'll Fuck You Up
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Yo yo yo
I'm known to penetrate raps, your known to get your face slapped/ On the other hand, you had flow, but you misplaced that/ Hard to trace that, I got ace tracks, so fans can taste that/ In fact, you lack what I enact, fake emcees get they skill cracked/ Read between the lines, your not straight your inbetween the lines/ Trying to dodge the mines that allign in your diract path of mind/ Tek change like the times, while you sit and pine I'm known to climb/ Subtle flow like wind chimes, I kill tracks I'm lyrically inclined/ Explosive I cause mass attention, whack emcees sent to detention/ For not paying attention, Battle any cat that gets my name mentioned/ Before it leaves their tongues, stop breaths like athsmatic lungs/ Automatics brung, in case a cat needs to be stunned for being dumb/ And they say I'm high strung, Spit so hard I drop blood from my gums/ Battle kids just for fun!, wrong move like you on ice and trying to run/ Frigid Temperatures, decrease flows in integers, to negative numbers/ Hypothermia leaves emcees in slumber, they freeze and die of hunger/ I'll invade your home like cable, and tatoo a whack emcee label/ Rhymes swept beneath the table, whats the moral of this fable?/ If you want to battle me your mentally unstable, not well and able/ You'll be Leaking alot of Red, Gone With the Wind like Clark Gable/ |
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The Predator
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i could be a country artist on the mic and i'd stiLL fuck you up/
your lyrics are a drag like your body attached to the back of my pick up/ you can't penetrate facts/ i'LL chip you apart wit an ice axe/ you spit cheap tales/ brought your lyrics to customer service an had em decline your resale/ i'm the perfect storm and your going down like the andrea gail/ so hide ya face nigga like a widow behind a black veil/ your fuckin' rhymes are like stale chips/ i block ya shine stylez i'm your personal solar eclipse/ matic clips mobb deep style/ fuckin wit me? that's like swimmin' in the nile and i'm a crocodile/ you gettin' ate ace/ cause those theories you're on only exist in your imaginary place/ this aint fable cause you know it happened/ i whipped your mutha fuckin' ass and that's without without attackin'/ send you packing wit no place to go/ you rap skiLLs witnessed death like vulnerable children from a tidal flow. (water current).. OmO < Idiom had to fix a typo
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Thats whats up Idiom, your a brave soul lol.
First to 3 votes GOOD LUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ![]() PeAcE |
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The Predator
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OmO < Idiom
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arite...both sum good verses...but tek gets my vote....used crazy vocab..and punch delivery was on point.....his verse to me flowed better and it was better constructed....
idiom....your verse want bad....but i aint feelin.......the white kid sayin nigga thing |
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from aLL the people on here you're the only one who's gave me lip about it......
but oh weLL, like in life - shit happens 1 OmO < Idiom
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THAT ASIDE.... MY VOTES WID TEK I LIKED HIS VERSE BETTER, DEF WELL STRUCTURED GOOD FLOW ETC COULDA HAD NICER PUNCHLINES!! IDIOM STILL CAME GOOD BUT I PREFERED TEKS!! PEACE 1 VOTE TEK |
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I'll Fuck You Up
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You crazy dawg, my shit not on some YOU GET POPPED LIKE CORN KERNELS BIT,
You'll be Leaking alot of Red, Gone With the Wind like Clark Gable/ ill line, If you ever seen gone with the wind the main characters name is Red and hes played by clark gable!! if you don't understand it don't mean its a bad punchline. |
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I'll Fuck You Up
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votes plz....
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The People's Champ
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I feel u on that one Tek, but punchlines are kinda like jokes, if you have to explain them they're just not as funny, guess you gotta remember your audience, lol,
On to the vote, Idiom wasnt bad but Tek killed line for line. Tek in the sweep. brooooommms please
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