VOTES NEEDED theheavens Vs. Dusk - Wu-Tang Corp. - Official Site of the Wu-Tang Clan

theheavens · 06-21-2010, 08:07 PM

might as well give it a try

DVSK · 06-21-2010, 10:05 PM

i accept

theheavens · 06-21-2010, 11:42 PM

nothing personal, just an exercise. here it is...

Around midnight, I ignite
Pistol-whip your wife
Slap the Hebrew out of Jesus Christ
Endorse the Chinese Water Torture device
Force you to recite the Koran out of spite

I don't give a damn about your intuition
You belong in the Colosseum with the early Christians
I'll drink the period blood of a Jehovah's Witness;
Strangle your bitch with her Fallopian tubes, listen

Inside your infant's room, creeping
I saw your baby boy, sleeping
My hands around his neck, weeping
Won't let go until I hear a death rattle for safekeeping;
As for your next of kin
I'll suffocate the fucker with my foreskin

Attack me with your fists, I insist
I'll break every bone in your wrist
Promise you'll become an amputee
If you even contemplate making a fist
Drown your baby at its Baptism for kicks

I'll send you a Hallmark card as a goodbye:
"Dear Dusk, I hope someone you love dies"

DVSK · 06-22-2010, 03:12 PM

i guess i should thank the heavens that we got another battle here
literally, while im spittin missles at the stratosphere
smashin peers, the mics by my heart like a lavalier
fashion spears out of rapper spines and apache tears
choosin to drop an impersonal verse was an act of fear
knowing im that revered at swfitly ending suckas rap careers
i hope ya face is good at catching shears, scissor kick
motherfuckers, then i twitch and brick on their sisters tits
sick isnt it, must be blasphemous
i break ya legs, lift the crutch u had to get and whip ya musty ass with it
short verse but hazardous, quality over quantity
yet the corp aint wantin me like the nazi's sponsored me
hittin jukebox's thats the fonzy part of me
and if heaven's song ever comes on then im jumpin sharks to flee
nothin personal dude, just an exercize
im god, as if anyone around Dusk would ever die..haha.....

theheavens · 06-22-2010, 03:40 PM

hah so who decides who wins the battle? and thanks for the opportunity

DVSK · 06-22-2010, 04:05 PM

no doubt man, good shit...now, votes

theheavens · 06-23-2010, 03:13 PM

you do any other kind of writing?

DVSK · 06-23-2010, 08:34 PM

ya poetry, screenplays, etc..

theheavens · 06-23-2010, 11:44 PM

nice. I got a friend who works as a film critic in cali. he likes this script I wrote and is pitching it to studios right now. that's the best opportunity I've gotten so far

DVSK · 06-24-2010, 07:43 PM

sick bro

Jragonsoul · 06-27-2010, 05:01 AM

My vote goes for Dusk I just loved his word play and I feel he was little more creative but I give mad love and respect to theheavens.

Jragonsoul · 06-27-2010, 05:18 AM

Also I want to battle the winner

DVSK · 06-27-2010, 11:07 AM

if there is one..eloels..thx

Krusha · 07-01-2010, 12:45 PM

I'll vote 4 Theheavens. So you're even,right?

DVSK · 07-01-2010, 08:09 PM

smh..yes..eloels.

06-21-2010, 08:07 PM	#1
theheavens The ABBOTT Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: DETROIT Posts: 3,263 Rep Power: 0	VOTES NEEDED theheavens Vs. Dusk might as well give it a try

06-21-2010, 10:05 PM	#2
DVSK Iron Man 3 Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 18,188 Rep Power: 65	i accept __________________

06-22-2010, 03:12 PM	#4
DVSK Iron Man 3 Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 18,188 Rep Power: 65	i guess i should thank the heavens that we got another battle here literally, while im spittin missles at the stratosphere smashin peers, the mics by my heart like a lavalier fashion spears out of rapper spines and apache tears choosin to drop an impersonal verse was an act of fear knowing im that revered at swfitly ending suckas rap careers i hope ya face is good at catching shears, scissor kick motherfuckers, then i twitch and brick on their sisters tits sick isnt it, must be blasphemous i break ya legs, lift the crutch u had to get and whip ya musty ass with it short verse but hazardous, quality over quantity yet the corp aint wantin me like the nazi's sponsored me hittin jukebox's thats the fonzy part of me and if heaven's song ever comes on then im jumpin sharks to flee nothin personal dude, just an exercize im god, as if anyone around Dusk would ever die..haha..... __________________

06-22-2010, 04:05 PM	#6
DVSK Iron Man 3 Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 18,188 Rep Power: 65	no doubt man, good shit...now, votes __________________

06-23-2010, 08:34 PM	#8
DVSK Iron Man 3 Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 18,188 Rep Power: 65	ya poetry, screenplays, etc.. __________________

06-21-2010, 11:42 PM	#3
theheavens The ABBOTT Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: DETROIT Posts: 3,263 Rep Power: 0	nothing personal, just an exercise. here it is... Around midnight, I ignite Pistol-whip your wife Slap the Hebrew out of Jesus Christ Endorse the Chinese Water Torture device Force you to recite the Koran out of spite I don't give a damn about your intuition You belong in the Colosseum with the early Christians I'll drink the period blood of a Jehovah's Witness; Strangle your bitch with her Fallopian tubes, listen Inside your infant's room, creeping I saw your baby boy, sleeping My hands around his neck, weeping Won't let go until I hear a death rattle for safekeeping; As for your next of kin I'll suffocate the fucker with my foreskin Attack me with your fists, I insist I'll break every bone in your wrist Promise you'll become an amputee If you even contemplate making a fist Drown your baby at its Baptism for kicks I'll send you a Hallmark card as a goodbye: "Dear Dusk, I hope someone you love dies"

06-22-2010, 03:40 PM	#5
theheavens The ABBOTT Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: DETROIT Posts: 3,263 Rep Power: 0	hah so who decides who wins the battle? and thanks for the opportunity

06-23-2010, 03:13 PM	#7
theheavens The ABBOTT Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: DETROIT Posts: 3,263 Rep Power: 0	you do any other kind of writing?

06-23-2010, 11:44 PM	#9
theheavens The ABBOTT Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: DETROIT Posts: 3,263 Rep Power: 0	nice. I got a friend who works as a film critic in cali. he likes this script I wrote and is pitching it to studios right now. that's the best opportunity I've gotten so far

06-24-2010, 07:43 PM	#10
DVSK Iron Man 3 Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 18,188 Rep Power: 65	sick bro __________________

06-27-2010, 05:01 AM	#11
Jragonsoul Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Augusta Africa Atlantis Posts: 291 Rep Power: 0	My vote goes for Dusk I just loved his word play and I feel he was little more creative but I give mad love and respect to theheavens.

06-27-2010, 05:18 AM	#12
Jragonsoul Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Augusta Africa Atlantis Posts: 291 Rep Power: 0	Also I want to battle the winner

06-27-2010, 11:07 AM	#13
DVSK Iron Man 3 Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 18,188 Rep Power: 65	if there is one..eloels..thx __________________

07-01-2010, 12:45 PM	#14
Krusha Caporegime Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 658 Rep Power: 0	I'll vote 4 Theheavens. So you're even,right? __________________

07-01-2010, 08:09 PM	#15
DVSK Iron Man 3 Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 18,188 Rep Power: 65	smh..yes..eloels. __________________

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