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10-10-2010, 01:36 AM
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king disguised as beggar.
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took a long drive up to San Francisco last week with my girl and during the most boring and grueling parts of the 11+ hours of driving i found myself freestyling which is something I've done only occasionally and while blazing with friends but never with my girl.....she encouraged me alot though and i unlocked a flood of rhymes
was just writing about it now and somehow allowed it to metamorphose into poem prose, here it is: I really unlocked and let burst out a whole new part of me on this trip... A poetic, verbally dexterous side that I often hide and keep inside not realizing it's alive, needing to come out and breathe, roll up his sleeves and craft arts & crafts, paragraphs, brain-opening battle-axes and seraphs Clear as glass, mental mass flow flood in flash, blast sun beams from my soul until they shine out my asshole I kept comparing freestyling to the act of surfing, though I've never been surfing before I imagine freestyling to a beat as surfing the rhythmic waves... You surf on the beat, sliding, gliding beyond the grasp of your feet Balance is a treat, symmetrical tweaks keep you going, water flowing and you must stay in tune with it Once you think about the process, you fall words as objects, you're all tied up in logic, conscious crawl the scrawl inside your mental wall is all that's needed, your mind is freed if you succeeded unlock the gates to Jesus freedom of speeches, water of life breeches the dam of conscious rationality This is the True Reality
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10-10-2010, 10:46 AM
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nice verses, tight rhymes.. interesting preface and commentary too
post more- -peace silencer
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10-10-2010, 10:56 AM
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Winter is Coming
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peace Silencer, some dope rhymes...... i encourage you to drop more as well lol
naw, but i feel what you said........ sometimes a woman can unlock deep inner thoughts and i feel rhyme patterns are a good way to let them be revealed peace |
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10-10-2010, 11:38 AM
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thats whats up. good 2 see u contributing to the Art. Peace
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10-10-2010, 04:45 PM
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king disguised as beggar.
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thanks fellas..
gonna let some more shit pour out soon the freedom of adulthood is a curse and a boon
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10-15-2010, 10:01 AM
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Once you think about the process, you fall
words as objects, you're all tied up in logic, conscious crawl the scrawl inside your mental wall is all Liked how this flowed , the whole piece was defintely unique.
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10-16-2010, 07:12 PM
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king disguised as beggar.
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thanks alot people
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10-27-2010, 07:12 PM
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yo that was dope
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10-28-2010, 03:30 AM
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Crash You In The Clouds!
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I knew it.
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