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Old 10-24-2010, 04:09 AM   #1
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Default Life (How if Unfolds) - Sheepish Lord of Chaos/Inspektah

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Me on the first verse, Sheep on the second.



i came through stories untold
spread like the plague across the globe
lighting the world up like a stove
trynna hold on to reality loosing my grip
hard to maintain when your minds playing tricks
i slip slowly, into a never ending abysss
where the cherished past
is about to perish past
memories that makes me laugh
becomes a thing of the past
my biggest obsession
to get a million in my possesion
leaving rappers burned like Michael Wesson
my vocals is blessing, learn a lesson
fucking with me, will only get u in depression
for years i've been concealed
time for me to be revealed
taking giant leaps like Armstrong, holmes
been through hell fire and brimstone
to set my name in stone
i beat you to a pulp non-fiction
reservior lions with glorious gentleman
advancing with the intention of death sentence


Sup See this is how life unfolds
this is how life unloads, recoils and reloads
hate the plight on a daily
hate the shit taken on a daily
hate the spotless mind of the dumb on the daily
hate those that diss all and love none...
sup see this is how life unfolds
this is how life unloads, recoils and reloads...


Deniable audio salable rhyme caliber mathematical rapture
given my birth guess my death is inevitable/
so when I came to work the boss looked
and said you jerk “YOUR FIRED”/
felt as if Doc Brown came back from the future
now obscure trips dipped low cash flow roasted toes/
boost my confines now rewind the tape didn't steal a thing
I think he was drunken by power for whatever means/
gifted scheme dream up revenge similar to the sith
by the gifts I can send your way wouldn't be anything McVay/
skim the gall from the game their gauge is effective as the cup next to me
you can't intimidate me, your fickle as a pickle that hasn't been picked yet/
debt paid full dues skew any views now we got problems
relations went all wrong getting played live full effect
is like a gun pointed at cha and pissing wet drenched in sweat/
didn't know what to think next is how I felt
when my rent got canceled, my job dissed me and the bitch didn't even bother to kiss me/
so I drifted into space, like a wasted trash case facing the wall nearest to the door
thinking why brawl, when I can work my ass off if I could actually find something/
hated pumping heat when the gas wasn't even on the cheap
guess my pockets dropped like the roof dropped on Dorthy/
port me like a PS2 Game file, guess now I am wild
as a Tasmanian devil reveal effortlessly dreading any outcome
guess we shall see on the next episode of how life unloads/
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Old 10-24-2010, 07:09 AM   #2
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both need to get a good mic
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Old 10-25-2010, 05:45 AM   #3
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well, other than that can you give me something like what i can improve with my flow.
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Old 10-25-2010, 07:48 AM   #4
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Old 10-25-2010, 07:58 AM   #5
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this is awful. i couldn't even listen past the first 15 seconds. take your time, get a better beat, learn to record, learn to mix a little bit and post one when you KNOW it sounds good. the lyrics i read are simplistic, but not terrible if you learn to spit proper.
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Old 11-23-2010, 08:14 PM   #6
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Since you're starting off. use slower beats..and I wouldnt be worried about making actual songs, I would just spit on some beats so you can develop a flow.
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Old 11-26-2010, 09:39 PM   #7
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well i got a good mic might be my laptops sound card sux asssssssssssssssss
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Old 11-26-2010, 09:50 PM   #8
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this was horrible
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Old 11-28-2010, 01:47 AM   #9
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rhyming to fast , mix isnt good, you need to level the mics out , when you try to make a song you need structure. its your 1st time learn from it. play it and if dont sound good than do it over until you feel its better
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