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Winter is Coming
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: The North
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Menes The ultra potent, quote absorbing inhale the quotient and exhale an indivisible number 7 An Inferno brewed in heaven, sent on the acquisition with calculated precision a rhyme hierarchy a scientific pyramid of life foundation, in the center a holy effigy disastrous pointed trilogy, paint pictures and soar infinity my groundworks is a soundburst, The LifeForce to recite forth set alight the coarse for thou to trace lines in the grains of wood ancient teachings, a scene of the aura peaking, no longer held by ceilings or feelings, emotions are demons through a soundscape revealing an inner being truth be told what is seen cannot be described only by a divine scribe and a quill without tithes an ink thats alive and a language of times when spoken all that is heard, a whisper sands in the hourglass until one meets his maker Bronze Feet Im ready to meet him, even better, ready to defeat him i got the top seat, blow like the winds through leaves on beats on sheets i leave miracles that are miraculous more math then calculus, grab the abacus you cant rhyme with us shit will never add up hold more weight then a freight truck like a deer you stuck in the headlights, speed through redlights, on dead nights take tight turns, kick in the after burns ashes to urns, fires twisted in tornado turns spell bound, hell hound on dead ground, my fist pound like skampoe, i dun rock the ocean and left whole towns soakin escape from your emotion we in the sections basement causin commotion depths of darkness promotin, pass the smoke that you holdin Last edited by THE MASON; 12-04-2009 at 10:59 AM. |
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AKA THE PROTO-CHAOS
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yo this was dope, but felt menes verse didn't flow well with the beat but bronze straight nailed the beat to cross like a cruifix, good work yall, throughly enjoyed it
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SiferBorn
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I liked Menes' verse, it was more hypnotic than bronze (who went in aggressive and took no prisoners) but both twisted an ill joint.
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weep for lost babylon, the bleeding god, the forgotten sheep slaughtered in a forest of evil fog bordered by a sea of faults, fleeing mobs turn to see the holocaust and become kings and queens of salt screaming shots, police and chalk, wingless fallen demons walking among us as people... -.5Kut |
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**-Skampoe-**
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bothof ya killed it, i liked bronze's better cuz of the S/O lol
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