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[verse 1]
Yo Im Comin Thru The Names 5 Sense Stayin Alert And Intense Masta Plan On Defense My Rhymes Keep You In Suspense Murderous Of Offense When You Make Me Incense They Step To This But Dont Diss When I Reminicse My Rhymes Are Abyss Ill Kill You Or Any Of Your Homies That Exist Ill Slit Your Wrist And Your Neck My Lifes Been Wrecked And Ill Affect You Like A Disease So Please Respect Fuck Neglect Cause I Reflect Back Like A Mirror And Person Connect My Rhymes You Cant Predict Im Obbsessed With The Game Like A Fucken Addict But Im Blessed With The Fame Like A Popular Convict [verse 2] Actuallly I Do Mind The Shit Talkin Factually You Dont Walk The Walk When I Start Chargin Cause It Be The Fi-ve Sen-se A True Lyric Spitten Emcee And I Guarantee Ill Keep Goin Like A Fucken Killin Spree Not A Pop Rapper Man I Only Spit The Real What I Feel Whatever The Deal Pop Rappers Dont Even Know The Unreal They Dont Undergo Circumstances Of The Surreal I Will Keep The Weapons Concealed So Dont Appeal Me Cause Im Always Ideal Its Like That My Rhymes Stay Phat Just Like A Seal Ever Since Birth Ive Been The Most Down To Earth Even Though Life Sucks Sometimes You Gotta Contain What Its Really Worth [verse 3] Respect Goes Out 2 Who Support And Love When Life Gives Me A Shove I Always Reach 4 The Above Can Handle Gettin Down N Depressed 2 Certain Degreez Ill Put A Bullet Thru Ur Vest 2 Hit You Straight In The Chest Might Be Possessed But I Stay Stressed Comptetitive Actions At Any Contest So I Suggest You Back Down Cuz Im A Straight Emcee Comin At You Straight From The West! |
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The third verse was much better, the first and second yes you were busting but it seemed as though you were revolving on the same issue, but the third you were coming out more (explicit that is),continue posting want to see more from you
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Thanks for your input bro, And for sure ill post new tracks soon
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MaN-ov-WaR
Join Date: Jun 2005
Posts: 808
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Sup rebel....you got mad potential bruh....stick around and keep elevatin on them skrolls...
This artfroms a weapon and we beheddin em' from tha mid-section.... keep it muvin'
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Yo thanks Blak
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