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08-26-2011, 10:47 AM
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God Of WAr
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clouded visionz
verse one
leaving the past unmasked is a rough task questions enough asked So let a new day start i meditated as half the day passed tickets and bills payed know i'm leaning with very little cash big heart and ego like the panthers it's power to the people it's seems were still unequal ruled by the elite evil's i couldn't operate my level was feeble leave you thinking about attacking from words of the reaction without defense no action why are the higher-up's acting? like nothing is wrong it's the same dances, and songs plus trees we roll or pull out of a bong now the weak are becoming strong enough to get it on and become owners instead of bums, and loners active wisdom in practice so we can achieve a power that was man-made i could never believe polluted air in my atmosphere it's a fear to breathe Hook clouded visionz of missions uncompleted we never retreated still undefeated v2 tired of fighting demons i can't see too brave to flee half my life a wanderer but never a wannabe blinded by the sun-light reflecting off the sea metaphorically my minds a university enough niggas backing me to rush a city generous acts my words soaked in facts slackers in slacks mimic my raps vocals recorded for a 5 stack pretty women had my mind trapped head hurting wearing a grind cap it's obvious he's broke hustling for smokes a fast car that broke-down for most memorable like the freedom trail until my dreams de-railed i failed women ruining their faces lacking inner-beauty this world is plastic soon to melt truly that's why i'm hostile with hot styles and so unruly saluting no men but my soulja's and sisters my expected wreckage call it the twister hit ya with no thought the truth lifter headed for zion with the iron the ironic mic ripper
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08-26-2011, 09:07 PM
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AKA THE PROTO-CHAOS
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damn J i love the pic you painted with this, you can see it visually as you read it
and you really grab the listener/the reader/the consumer with this
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08-27-2011, 05:35 AM
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Writing verses in S9
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Damn this was powerful JTS.
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08-29-2011, 09:52 AM
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God Of WAr
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thanks guys..
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08-31-2011, 10:13 AM
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that 1st verse killed
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08-31-2011, 11:23 AM
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God Of WAr
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big up's king!
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09-02-2011, 10:24 PM
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TRIBU MILITIA
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it's obvious he's broke hustling for smokes
a fast car that broke-down for most memorable like the freedom trail until my dreams de-railed i failed women ruining their faces lacking inner-beauty this world is plastic soon to melt truly that's why i'm hostile with hot styles and so unruly some poetic shit write there nice |
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09-03-2011, 12:28 PM
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God Of WAr
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thanks sinista!
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