In My Kitchen - Wu-Tang Corp. - Official Site of the Wu-Tang Clan

noel411 · 08-04-2011, 06:06 PM

I decided to have a go at writing some lyrics for a dance song and thought I'd post them up here to see what you guys think of them. Any feedback would be appreciated.

There'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
so stop snitchin'!

TheBoarzHeadBoy · 08-05-2011, 01:42 AM

Can't go wrong with just tight complicated lyrics. This shit is masterfully insightful and shows a real progression from your earlier stuff. You've really grown as an artist, hopefully your fans don't feel like you're selling out the style that they first fell in love with in favor of a new aesthetic. It's like Kanye, he opened up his audience to new people but there is a marked change and some of the older fans feel alienated. You can't please everyone, you can only pleasure yourself.

ArcherPriest · 08-05-2011, 07:46 AM

haha pure FIRE!

noel411 · 08-08-2011, 09:16 PM

Cheers guys. I appreciate the feedback. I'm keen to write a few more dance songs but I've been suffering from writer's block since I exhausted all my creative energy on this one.

sileNt.siN. · 08-09-2011, 04:32 AM

This.

This is what real looks like.
- Spokenn.

FRiTz · 08-10-2011, 08:00 AM

daaaaaaam

MOUSER WORDS · 09-05-2011, 09:14 PM

crazy dude

08-04-2011, 06:06 PM	#1
noel411 aka Loc Daddy Supreme Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Australia Age: 30 Posts: 2,959 Rep Power: 24	In My Kitchen I decided to have a go at writing some lyrics for a dance song and thought I'd post them up here to see what you guys think of them. Any feedback would be appreciated. There'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen, so stop snitchin'! __________________

08-05-2011, 01:42 AM	#2
TheBoarzHeadBoy כהן גדול Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: New Hampshire Posts: 3,682 Rep Power: 0	Can't go wrong with just tight complicated lyrics. This shit is masterfully insightful and shows a real progression from your earlier stuff. You've really grown as an artist, hopefully your fans don't feel like you're selling out the style that they first fell in love with in favor of a new aesthetic. It's like Kanye, he opened up his audience to new people but there is a marked change and some of the older fans feel alienated. You can't please everyone, you can only pleasure yourself. __________________ HANKERING FOR SOME BEEF CURTAINS

08-08-2011, 09:16 PM	#4
noel411 aka Loc Daddy Supreme Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Australia Age: 30 Posts: 2,959 Rep Power: 24	Cheers guys. I appreciate the feedback. I'm keen to write a few more dance songs but I've been suffering from writer's block since I exhausted all my creative energy on this one. __________________

08-09-2011, 04:32 AM	#5
sileNt.siN. SPOKENN who? Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: miami. Age: 23 Posts: 134 Rep Power: 0	This. This is what real looks like. - Spokenn. __________________ Facebook Bandcamp Soundcloud Soundcloud #2 SoundClick

08-10-2011, 08:00 AM	#6
FRiTz LORD AKU Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: the lab Posts: 285 Rep Power: 0	daaaaaaam __________________ http://soundcloud.com/funky-technicians https://soundcloud.com/lord-aku

08-05-2011, 07:46 AM	#3
ArcherPriest black pope Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 896 Rep Power: 13	haha pure FIRE!

09-05-2011, 09:14 PM	#7
MOUSER WORDS Love Poet .. M c of Love Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: LOS ANGELES , CA / TIJUANA , MEXICO Age: 28 Posts: 1,704 Rep Power: 11	crazy dude __________________ you re blown

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