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THE MASON · 07-12-2012, 11:38 PM

well maybe not lol

feedback is appreciated

rate its outta 5

lol new system

THE MASON · 07-13-2012, 04:29 PM

bump, where yall at?

$inista · 07-13-2012, 04:44 PM

shit is dope as fuck, type dark i dig it

THE MASON · 07-13-2012, 06:38 PM

peace bro. thanks for listening

JehovAllah · 07-13-2012, 10:30 PM

i thought the sample was too ill for the the drums to come in real sketchy like that

drums needed a better intro to the sample ratio persay ya honor lol
"in Eddie Murphs voice"^

but yea
drums r dope
the pattern over that sample could have been more tight IMO is whut im sayin

BEATSMITH RESIST · 07-14-2012, 03:21 AM

sounds off a lil yo...but keep working on it. Some times ill trash beats & start all over lol

THE MASON · 07-14-2012, 07:29 AM

^peace fellas,

ya i got whole folders of unfinished beats lol

Boss_Digger · 07-14-2012, 03:10 PM

sample is fucking ill but I agree on both points already made, the drums could come in smoother and the timing is def off a little, mostly the bass which is'nt landing with the drums, remember the bass is part of the rythem section and should interact with the drums more so than the melody. Def work on this some more tho man get that shit tighter and you got a massive banger on your hands!!!

peace

MANTIS69 · 07-17-2012, 11:41 AM

It does sound a lil off beat but thats what a like about it myself. The sample kinda gets you in hype mode. Im diggin it. peace

Shadow Demon · 07-19-2012, 09:55 AM

drums sound off....not right, maybe its just youtube

i think you need a beat switch or some more instrumental depth to the song...i like the eerie stringsthat play in the background

BornPower · 07-19-2012, 03:27 PM

I'm diggin the beat, Mason.
while I see what they mean about the drums not bein smooth enough, they work for me and I dig the way it feels a little off-kilter.
I'd rip it as is.

four outta five

Drunken Monk · 07-19-2012, 03:28 PM

diggin the sample , drums could be betta imo

canibus · 07-19-2012, 03:35 PM

nice beat mane!

Mumm Ra · 07-21-2012, 11:44 AM

i like the drums idk what they talkin about, that snare is super nice too

only thing that could improve is the bassline imo, bring that out more and it'll be a super head noddin ass beat
nice work bronze

THE MASON · 07-26-2012, 10:00 PM

peace fellas thanks for checkin it out and givin some solid feedback

07-12-2012, 11:38 PM	#1
THE MASON Winter is Coming Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: The North Posts: 11,998 Rep Power: 119	This Is My Turf....... well maybe not lol feedback is appreciated rate its outta 5 lol new system __________________ Click 4 More Beats and Rhymes ELITE STATUS

07-13-2012, 04:29 PM	#2
THE MASON Winter is Coming Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: The North Posts: 11,998 Rep Power: 119	bump, where yall at? __________________ Click 4 More Beats and Rhymes ELITE STATUS

07-13-2012, 04:44 PM	#3
$inista TRIBU MILITIA Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Killa Hill....10304 Posts: 1,562 Rep Power: 34	shit is dope as fuck, type dark i dig it __________________ http://www.mediafire.com/?513ez9qnb8xaulk

07-13-2012, 06:38 PM	#4
THE MASON Winter is Coming Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: The North Posts: 11,998 Rep Power: 119	peace bro. thanks for listening __________________ Click 4 More Beats and Rhymes ELITE STATUS

07-13-2012, 10:30 PM	#5
JehovAllah -Skampoe- Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: I BE WHERE IM @ Age: 32 Posts: 42,915 Rep Power: 194	i thought the sample was too ill for the the drums to come in real sketchy like that drums needed a better intro to the sample ratio persay ya honor lol "in Eddie Murphs voice"^ but yea drums r dope the pattern over that sample could have been more tight IMO is whut im sayin __________________

07-14-2012, 03:21 AM	#6
BEATSMITH RESIST what what? Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: San Diego Posts: 180 Rep Power: 0	sounds off a lil yo...but keep working on it. Some times ill trash beats & start all over lol __________________ http://www.beatsmithresist.com/ http://beatsmithresist.tumblr.com/

07-14-2012, 07:29 AM	#7
THE MASON Winter is Coming Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: The North Posts: 11,998 Rep Power: 119	^peace fellas, ya i got whole folders of unfinished beats lol __________________ Click 4 More Beats and Rhymes ELITE STATUS

07-14-2012, 03:10 PM	#8
Boss_Digger Fuck quantize!! Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: U.K. Age: 34 Posts: 2,541 Rep Power: 26	sample is fucking ill but I agree on both points already made, the drums could come in smoother and the timing is def off a little, mostly the bass which is'nt landing with the drums, remember the bass is part of the rythem section and should interact with the drums more so than the melody. Def work on this some more tho man get that shit tighter and you got a massive banger on your hands!!! peace __________________ STUDENT OF THE CULTURE: OUT NOW!!! www.7thproduction.co.uk www.facebook.com/the.7thproduction http://twitter.com/#!/7thproduction Last edited by Boss_Digger; 07-14-2012 at 03:12 PM. Reason: Blonde moment

07-17-2012, 11:41 AM	#9
MANTIS69 GRANDMASSIVE Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: WASHINGTON D.C. , VA CATS Age: 35 Posts: 1,437 Rep Power: 20	It does sound a lil off beat but thats what a like about it myself. The sample kinda gets you in hype mode. Im diggin it. peace __________________ GRANDMASSIVE AKA HIGH PRIEST RAW CHRIST SHABAZZ in 2011 http://www.reverbnation.com/grandmas...wchristshabazz http://www.soundclick.com/grandmassive http://www.myspace.com/8477926

07-19-2012, 09:55 AM	#10
Shadow Demon PRODIGAL SUN Join Date: May 2012 Posts: 956 Rep Power: 0	drums sound off....not right, maybe its just youtube i think you need a beat switch or some more instrumental depth to the song...i like the eerie stringsthat play in the background __________________

07-19-2012, 03:27 PM	#11
BornPower SiferBorn Join Date: May 2006 Location: Souf CHIolin Age: 31 Posts: 1,248 Blog Entries: 27 Rep Power: 15	I'm diggin the beat, Mason. while I see what they mean about the drums not bein smooth enough, they work for me and I dig the way it feels a little off-kilter. I'd rip it as is. four outta five __________________ weep for lost babylon, the bleeding god, the forgotten sheep slaughtered in a forest of evil fog bordered by a sea of faults, fleeing mobs turn to see the holocaust and become kings and queens of salt screaming shots, police and chalk, wingless fallen demons walking among us as people... -.5Kut

07-19-2012, 03:28 PM	#12
Drunken Monk Veteran Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 7,739 Rep Power: 41	diggin the sample , drums could be betta imo

07-19-2012, 03:35 PM	#13
canibus Join Date: May 2011 Posts: 9 Rep Power: 0	nice beat mane!

07-21-2012, 11:44 AM	#14
Mumm Ra God's Replica Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Black Pyramid Age: 27 Posts: 9,602 Blog Entries: 2 Rep Power: 73	i like the drums idk what they talkin about, that snare is super nice too only thing that could improve is the bassline imo, bring that out more and it'll be a super head noddin ass beat nice work bronze __________________ DOWNLOAD MASTER PLAN LP!!

07-26-2012, 10:00 PM	#15
THE MASON Winter is Coming Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: The North Posts: 11,998 Rep Power: 119	peace fellas thanks for checkin it out and givin some solid feedback __________________ Click 4 More Beats and Rhymes ELITE STATUS

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