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well maybe not lol feedback is appreciated rate its outta 5 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() lol new system |
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bump, where yall at?
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shit is dope as fuck, type dark i dig it
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peace bro. thanks for listening
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i thought the sample was too ill for the the drums to come in real sketchy like that
drums needed a better intro to the sample ratio persay ya honor lol "in Eddie Murphs voice"^ but yea drums r dope the pattern over that sample could have been more tight IMO is whut im sayin |
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what what?
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sounds off a lil yo...but keep working on it. Some times ill trash beats & start all over lol
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^peace fellas,
ya i got whole folders of unfinished beats lol |
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Fuck quantize!!
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sample is fucking ill but I agree on both points already made, the drums could come in smoother and the timing is def off a little, mostly the bass which is'nt landing with the drums, remember the bass is part of the rythem section and should interact with the drums more so than the melody. Def work on this some more tho man get that shit tighter and you got a massive banger on your hands!!!
peace
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It does sound a lil off beat but thats what a like about it myself. The sample kinda gets you in hype mode. Im diggin it. peace
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drums sound off....not right, maybe its just youtube
i think you need a beat switch or some more instrumental depth to the song...i like the eerie stringsthat play in the background
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I'm diggin the beat, Mason.
while I see what they mean about the drums not bein smooth enough, they work for me and I dig the way it feels a little off-kilter. I'd rip it as is. ![]() four outta five
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diggin the sample , drums could be betta imo
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nice beat mane!
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God's Replica
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i like the drums idk what they talkin about, that snare is super nice too
only thing that could improve is the bassline imo, bring that out more and it'll be a super head noddin ass beat nice work bronze |
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Winter is Coming
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peace fellas thanks for checkin it out and givin some solid feedback
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