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Old 06-23-2005, 01:35 PM   #1
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Default The Art Of Flame Ballet

havent posted anything on here in a while

once again, i descend the dense marshes mirk/
step to earth, a swarm of meteors befriends my birth/
stem of worth, blooms in the falcons blur/
storm turfs of vultures then blend them into curbs/
i sent my words... to war the steel trojans/
warriors feriocious, but lost, left afloat in ghost ships/
stand alone, so now i roam the catabombs/
head home, relax... your shattered fractured bones/
cuz your verse structure didnt work and it crumbled/
in this jungle, i'm a leaping tiger in the furns/
refined conscious... when lost in silent solace/
the minds torches light, and blinds your fibre optics/
try to dodge this viper nosedive apocalypse/
shine emanates... behind the mace of this horror shit/
flow penetrates, icicles rain upon your face/
scorching flames surge ballet with a burning grace/
a turn of fate... i find myself in seductive clutches/
of creativity, slave of verbal substance/
worthless rappers burn inside the falcons furnace/
spit verbs, inflict the curse, watch rappers flee and disperse/

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Old 06-23-2005, 01:52 PM   #2
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good to see you back on the corp

a true lyricist legend

i liked this piece alot

especially

"flow penetrates, icicles rain upon your face/
scorching flames surge ballet with a burning grace/
a turn of fate... i find myself in seductive clutches/
of creativity, slave of verbal substance/
worthless rappers burn inside the falcons furnace/
spit verbs, inflict the curse, watch rappers flee and disperse/"


these lines are the best on the verse

they flow like water from the river nile

Keep postin up

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Old 06-23-2005, 02:48 PM   #3
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yea the lyrics are nice..i like ur work
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Old 06-23-2005, 05:51 PM   #4
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sup Winte



once again, i descend the dense marshes mirk/
step to earth, a swarm of meteors befriends my birth/
stem of worth, blooms in the falcons blur/
storm turfs of vultures then blend them into curbs/
i sent my words... to war the steel trojans/
warriors feriocious, but lost, left afloat in ghost ships/
stand alone, so now i roam the catabombs/
head home, relax... your shattered fractured bones/
cuz your verse structure didnt work and it crumbled/
in this jungle, i'm a leaping tiger in the furns/
refined conscious... when lost in silent solace/
the minds torches light, and blinds your fibre optics/
try to dodge this viper nosedive apocalypse/
shine emanates... behind the mace of this horror shit/
flow penetrates, icicles rain upon your face/
scorching flames surge ballet with a burning grace/
a turn of fate... i find myself in seductive clutches/
of creativity, slave of verbal substance/
worthless rappers burn inside the falcons furnace/
spit verbs, inflict the curse, watch rappers flee and disperse/


Tha highlighted parts are whut i liked most.....Your overall ryme is tight.....
Imagery is definately there thou ive seen betta from you from an imagery perspective.....


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Old 06-24-2005, 02:44 AM   #5
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Yah i guess you're warming up? Definately want to check more of your posts here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Old 06-24-2005, 04:18 AM   #6
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Your Verse Structure Didnt Crumble
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Old 06-24-2005, 06:50 AM   #7
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Old 06-24-2005, 07:04 AM   #8
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Old 06-24-2005, 02:40 PM   #9
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havent posted anything on here in a while

once again, i descend the dense marshes mirk/
step to earth, a swarm of meteors befriends my birth/
stem of worth, blooms in the falcons blur/
storm turfs of vultures then blend them into curbs/
i sent my words... to war the steel trojans/
warriors feriocious, but lost, left afloat in ghost ships/
stand alone, so now i roam the catabombs/
head home, relax... your shattered fractured bones/
cuz your verse structure didnt work and it crumbled/
in this jungle, i'm a leaping tiger in the furns/
refined conscious... when lost in silent solace/
the minds torches light, and blinds your fibre optics/
try to dodge this viper nosedive apocalypse/
shine emanates... behind the mace of this horror shit/
flow penetrates, icicles rain upon your face/
scorching flames surge ballet with a burning grace/
a turn of fate... i find myself in seductive clutches/
of creativity, slave of verbal substance/
worthless rappers burn inside the falcons furnace/
spit verbs, inflict the curse, watch rappers flee and disperse/

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give me honest opinions

peace
Hot *isht right here man ... very smooth, dark flow. Kinda reminds me cd's writing style.

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Old 06-24-2005, 03:51 PM   #10
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dope shit man, how are u winte?

i like the flow and imagery, poetic shit son props
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Old 06-24-2005, 04:33 PM   #11
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Default Re: The Art Of Flame Ballet

thanks a lot for the feedback everyone

yeah, i'm good ronin, just been workin on more music.... got my EP coming soon and i'll post more stuff up in the meantime

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