The minds of man

[Cap I]

Hittin with exquisite compositions, deadly persition,
breaking you out that mental prison,
spittin scrolls written with ancient wisdoms, seeing future visions,
shearing knowledge given by the all seeing being,
devils fleeing in panic by the way retributions handed,
trying to move minds stranded,
drastic measures must be taken to find mental treasures,
they say pleasure of the soul are better then those of the body,
but I cant seem to find them trapped in the despair of poverty,
I was born to forfil prophecy,
on a mission to destroy divisions of humanity,
evolution of the mind out the pits of insanity,
to reach higher levels of reality,
most minds aint ready for the truth, i destroy lies savagely,
the devils trickery and lies be deceiving the unwise,
treachery I despise, cant catch me in his evil plan,
above it I rise bring with me the minds of man.

[100pr00f]

it flows nice ...keep it up

[Dae Ja Nae]

Originally Posted by 100pr00f

it flows nice ...keep it up

No doubt ... Peace

[BlaK FuRYaN]

Hittin with exquisite compositions, deadly persition,
breaking you out that mental prison,
spittin scrolls written with ancient wisdoms, seeing future visions,
shearing knowledge given by the all seeing being,
devils fleeing in panic by the way retributions handed,
trying to move minds stranded,
drastic measures must be taken to find mental treasures,
they say pleasure of the soul are better then those of the body,
but I cant seem to find them trapped in the despair of poverty,
I was born to forfil prophecy,
on a mission to destroy divisions of humanity,
evolution of the mind out the pits of insanity,
to reach higher levels of reality,
most minds aint ready for the truth, i destroy lies savagely,
the devils trickery and lies be deceiving the unwise,
treachery I despise, cant catch me in his evil plan,
above it I rise bring with me the minds of man.


A few gems uppin this piece bruh....keep it moovin'

[GuardianOne]

Originally Posted by Cap I

Hittin with exquisite compositions, deadly persition,
breaking you out that mental prison,
spittin scrolls written with ancient wisdoms, seeing future visions,
shearing knowledge given by the all seeing being,
devils fleeing in panic by the way retributions handed,
trying to move minds stranded,
drastic measures must be taken to find mental treasures,
they say pleasure of the soul are better then those of the body,
but I cant seem to find them trapped in the despair of poverty,
I was born to forfil prophecy,
on a mission to destroy divisions of humanity,
evolution of the mind out the pits of insanity,
to reach higher levels of reality,
most minds aint ready for the truth, i destroy lies savagely,
the devils trickery and lies be deceiving the unwise,
treachery I despise, cant catch me in his evil plan,
above it I rise bring with me the minds of man.

The colored parts is what i think is your true style, and for you to bring this verse in such a way is very talented. Your style is quite unique, whilst they are parts that flow which bring a sense of accomplishment (in you lyrics). Respect , this is another new style up in here (Darts of Knowledge). You need to expand on your style (like the colored parts thats your style).

Repect
Peace
PS: Continue posting, we expect that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Rebel_INS]

Damn niceness

[Cap I]

Thanks for the feedback. I use to post on here but I been gone for a while.