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Old 08-12-2006, 12:15 AM   #31
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yo sumtimes concept gets dirty like las vegas vagrants
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i spit amazing ask my agent
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Old 08-23-2006, 04:20 PM   #32
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shit i can tell that you a kurupt nigga
if i saw you in my headlights i'd probly speed up nigga
like fuck your life nigga, i put that on my knife nigga
i skeeted on your sheets twice, fucking up your wife nigga
okay we in the back nigga, four dudes four gats nigga
Black masks brown tims, duct tape you wack niggas
wouldnt make the track nigga, dont make me pull the black trigga
have you seeing bright lights till the flames come to snatch a nigga
you a wack nigga, get sent up, tell niggas you was framed
see the bigger picture, probobly snitch out your whole team
and if you could smoke this rap, you'd already be a fiend
but you just a lazy nigga, cock eyed and crazy nigga
and i be droppin slang like cosby dropping babies nigga
pussy nigga, you all pussy and no nigga
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Old 08-23-2006, 10:33 PM   #33
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c im the type of person that wuld try to help someone out before talkin shit, but u realllyyy need to work on ur skills b. all around.
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Old 08-24-2006, 06:29 PM   #34
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shit i can tell that you a kurupt nigga
if i saw you in my headlights i'd probly speed up nigga
like fuck your life nigga, i put that on my knife nigga
i skeeted on your sheets twice, fucking up your wife nigga
okay we in the back nigga, four dudes four gats nigga
Black masks brown tims, duct tape you wack niggas
wouldnt make the track nigga, dont make me pull the black trigga
have you seeing bright lights till the flames come to snatch a nigga
you a wack nigga, get sent up, tell niggas you was framed
see the bigger picture, probobly snitch out your whole team
and if you could smoke this rap, you'd already be a fiend
but you just a lazy nigga, cock eyed and crazy nigga
and i be droppin slang like cosby dropping babies nigga
pussy nigga, you all pussy and no nigga
damn, I ain't heard the word 'nigga' used so many times in a paragraph since the KKK was on Jerry Springer, step your game up kid, that shit's played out, git original with your words, that ain't even a verse right there, that's some kid shit!
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Old 08-25-2006, 06:04 PM   #35
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what yall talking about, i thought it was great, just take the nigga out if you dont like it and put in any word, still flows, i bolded the words i'd stress if i was rappin so you can catch the flow.

shit i can tell that you a kurupt kid
if i saw you in my headlights i'd probly speed up kid
like fuck your life kid, i put that on my knife kid
i skeeted on your sheets twice, fucking up your wife kid
okay we in the back kid, four dudes four gats kid
Black masks brown tims, duct tape you wack kids
wouldnt make the track kid, dont make me pull the black trigga
have you seeing bright lights till the flames come to snatch a nigga
you a wack kid, get sent up, tell kids you was framed
see the bigger picture, probobly snitch out your whole team
and if you could smoke this rap, you'd already be a fiend
but you just a lazy kid, cock eyed and crazy kid
and i be droppin slang like cosby dropping babies kid
pussy kid, you all pussy and no kid
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Old 08-26-2006, 03:17 PM   #36
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the problem isnt the word u used but to put it after ever fuckin line is just pointless, i understand you tryin to b creative and do somethin different but that doesnt neccesarily mean that its gonna b better.
try somethin else and ill get back at u.
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Old 08-26-2006, 08:46 PM   #37
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what yall talking about, i thought it was great, just take the nigga out if you dont like it and put in any word, still flows, i bolded the words i'd stress if i was rappin so you can catch the flow.

shit i can tell that you a kurupt kid
if i saw you in my headlights i'd probly speed up kid
like fuck your life kid, i put that on my knife kid
i skeeted on your sheets twice, fucking up your wife kid
okay we in the back kid, four dudes four gats kid
Black masks brown tims, duct tape you wack kids
wouldnt make the track kid, dont make me pull the black trigga
have you seeing bright lights till the flames come to snatch a nigga
you a wack kid, get sent up, tell kids you was framed
see the bigger picture, probobly snitch out your whole team
and if you could smoke this rap, you'd already be a fiend
but you just a lazy kid, cock eyed and crazy kid
and i be droppin slang like cosby dropping babies kid
pussy kid, you all pussy and no kid

The problem is the content, rhyming the same word at the end of EVERY bar isnt impressive, hate to break it to you
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Old 08-30-2006, 02:50 PM   #38
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umm yeah if you look at the word before the last word of every bar... you know what nevermind... did you even read my verse?
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Old 09-03-2006, 11:55 PM   #39
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Old 09-10-2006, 11:02 PM   #40
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