LOve BOat!!

[Tunavillian]

I wrote this one a little while ago to that busta rhymes/mariah carey track

Just expressin' the way I feel thru the motion of this pen/
let the ink release emotion cause i'm feelin' frozen when in/
your presence baby girl, u got my heart beatin'/
palms sweatin', paradise palm springs, start heatin'/
look into yur eyes, gaze into a rare beauty/
of purity, pretty smile just lurin' me in/
gettin' closer/
thoughts like a roller coaster/
shot by cupid talkin' stupid like how i ain't suppose tah/
french candy, yur sweetness got me hungry for affection/
i promise you'll be safe in my arms, wit more protection/
than these other cats, they tryin' to play u for some sexin'/
I know i'm new to this, but i'm willin' to learn some lessons/
wettin' my lips, just dyin' to give you a kiss/
feel the passion with deepness like the hidden abbys/
yo, we can laugh together/
a perfect match can't ask for better/
pillow fight in the twilght, my love will last forever...baby/

[SHRAP]

shit was good. no homo. i was gonna skip it but then i remembered what track u were talking about and the beat popped into my head and i thought why not read dukes rhymes while its there, hahah

[GuardianOne]

Doesn't seem real. But somehow you had the flow going . Maybe if you had been more creative.

Peace
PS: Keep posting

[Tunavillian]

what do u mean it doesn't seem real...& creative?

[Rebel_INS]

Nice!

[Dae Ja Nae]

Originally Posted by Tunavillian

I wrote this one a little while ago to that busta rhymes/mariah carey track

Just expressin' the way I feel thru the motion of this pen/
let the ink release emotion cause i'm feelin' frozen when in/
your presence baby girl, u got my heart beatin'/
palms sweatin', paradise palm springs, start heatin'/
look into yur eyes, gaze into a rare beauty/
of purity, pretty smile just lurin' me in/
gettin' closer/
thoughts like a roller coaster/
shot by cupid talkin' stupid like how i ain't suppose tah/
french candy, yur sweetness got me hungry for affection/
i promise you'll be safe in my arms, wit more protection/
than these other cats, they tryin' to play u for some sexin'/
I know i'm new to this, but i'm willin' to learn some lessons/
wettin' my lips, just dyin' to give you a kiss/
feel the passion with deepness like the hidden abbys/
yo, we can laugh together/
a perfect match can't ask for better/
pillow fight in the twilght, my love will last forever...baby/

... Hottness ... fo sho ... flows perfectly with the beat.

Peace

[Zac McFly]

Illness!