|
|
|
#1 |
|
Junior Member
Join Date: Jan 2007
Posts: 55
Rep Power: 0 ![]() |
We got it locked like a crowd of dreads
The music is loud to shred Thru the black cloud over my head My heart is proud but if bled Cause its broken covered in bloodshed I think like Malcolm X on point with lead Act like Detroit Red out for joints and bread And speak like El-Hajj Malik Shabazz Bring heat to last to beat the crass Standing on my feet till the last Days cause these cats are weak and ass acting brand new I stand true cause a Stan I might knew Would force my hand to do what I have to do Listening to the Who sober or bent the God sent With the hunger and mental strength To sustain from hate for freedom and estates Like Harriet Tubman so I can escape From the belly of the beast grim fate Just wait man to lead hand in hand The mentally enslaved to the promise land real bold Thru the Underground Railroad To get the major fold on the right train of thought That can’t be bought but is always sought for to uplift the will Prophecy fulfilled to pay my bills I must say I’m skilled My life I lay on the line for dollar bills Thank you for absorbing light I shine. Peace |
|
|
|
|
|
#2 |
|
"Come as you are"
|
The best thing i can say is the flow was consistent for alot of the lines, metaphors were simple, no true wordplay, and played out concepts. 5/10
__________________
The dealer of hope is selling me lies Reasons to live are reasons to die, in disguise This life was never mine, the rivers never ran Cross your arms, its too late for helping hands Spit your pity elsewhere, there's no sympathy needed For one who's never alive, for one who's never completed (Bigot Hitman) http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/sho...=25482&page=61 |
|
|
|
|
|
#3 |
|
Junior Member
Join Date: Jan 2007
Posts: 55
Rep Power: 0 ![]() |
lol, yeah alright, I appreciate the feedback. I could learn a lot from "cops think Im like a empty starch can, an i wont "spray." Genius. Peace
|
|
|
|
![]() |
| Thread Tools | |
| Display Modes | |
|
|