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Coming of Age...
Join Date: Aug 2007
Location: Sheol
Age: 29
Posts: 179
Rep Power: 0 ![]() |
This thread is a display of the gems that I am occasionally blessed to receive. Your judgment is what I desire most. Elevation only comes through criticism and correction, so I appreciate any words that you are willing to leave.
Lyrical Lariat: I got more cold cuts than delicatessens, teach you a helluva lesson/ the majority of cyphers is simply celibate sessions sellin digression/ a literal circle of lyrical virgins attemptin to sell an impression/ me? I would rather accelerate affection or just tell of my blessins/ use my bars to ask relevant questions that develop progression/ rip fellas in sections wit a vocabulary deeper than pelicans restin/ now I’ve finally found shelter from hell and the devil’s tempest/ when the tempter attempts to tempt this I turn to Jah for defenses/ diablo’s defenseless against this intense prayer warrior’s senses/ my message is inexpensive if only you would just pay attention/ stay attentive as jury benches cuz the truth gets buried in trenches/ this hurtful violence is endless, the church’s silence is senseless/ celebrities smile for lenses, paparazzi pry in private parties for pensions/ drugs delve deadbeat daddies down demented devilish dimensions/ drunk drivers in S10s bring station wagons down deadly dead ends/ dead friends is what tends to send men to follow suicidal trends/ jumpin street medians, the media’s teachin us to be greedy and tedious/ our TV is misleadin us, mistreatin us, our seeds is what’s needin us/ I’m never mad whenever pens and pads is my needed ingredients/ my mic is my medium, your attention is what’s needed immediate... I Forgive You (verse one) My pain--migrates--like migraine aches/ my strain’s--wide placed--like five great lakes/ touchin a number of states, confusion included/ secluded in a dungeon til someone intruded/ imputed purity to my ventricles from verticals/ surged verges of vertigo since I burst from the cervical/ like spiritual surgicals, had emergency transplants/ flashbacks of urgency was purgin me past that/ pack rats ain’t concernin me, burnin up Black packs/ these wack cats in backpacks ain’t half as abstract/ can you match that classic rap amidst pop singles/ pockets of hot nickels, cold as popsicles wit block lingo/ the single king of neo-soul wit sprinkles of rhyme/ I’m not tryna put a hot iron to this wrinkle in time/ no regrets, holdin vets to they bets, child support debts/ it’s treacherous but yet I gets naughty by nature on the set/ that ain’t even my best lest distress dares me to stop/ Midwest declare me the best, this sess compares me to Pac/ every single compliment boosts my confidence/ I abhor cockiness, I stay abstinent from obstinates/ I’m a optimist, positive I won’t be stopped by obstacles/ clear cataracts in my opticals wit a whole box of Optimos/ Picasso is better than ever, never ever under the weather/ sever the feather soft, yes, the successor of Nebuchadnezzar… Metamorphosis: Time to rock the boat and ride the ripples, rhymes that’s simple/ get crippled in my mental whenever I’m high off indo/ spit flows from my temple that’ll make yo’s decrescendo/ assemble cymbals as the kickdrum make yo chest tremble/ yes, I’m dead broke, ain’t tryna make no friends, though/ but if you breakin bread, then you made one to the end, joe/ my pencil is my utensil to stencil my credentials/ at the central of heathens kept from reachin my potential/ prudential since knockin out windows in my residential/ providential, droppin gems so pretend you comprehend those/ I’ve conceived rhymes so deep, you wouldn’t even believe/ even if you seen me and heard em breathed between my teeth/ I roll wit thieves, smokin leaves seems to be my lone reprieve/ I teach my boy to read, so my seed come half as dope as me/ he’s only three--- wit affection to me sweet as potpourri/ reason enough to bleed, decry greed, and live soberly/ follow authority, stop disorderly thoughts that lower me/ plan trips overseas, speak Portugese wit African minorities/ this vision seem lofty, but too oft we tend to think softly/ now I’m awfully close to gettin this lost mindstate off me/ thank Jah... |
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