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Lord come rescue us from this treacherous replica of history's
misery & undiscovered mystery, Gun love epiphany, i'll blow you into infinity. Mud runs where the rivers deep, Crescent red sun above the giving tree, You heard my battlecry symphony allied with undead infantry, 20,000 leagues down in the sea, drowning but free, we witness the crowning of kings. I bring a surrounding of dreams where things are not what they seem, Apocalypse theme....(album in '08) This a verse from the track "White Zombie" on my album "City of Fire", dropping mid '08. PHXorcist of the South West - Phoenix Rising 2007 |
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If anyone has feedback on these verses i'd appreciate it. I probably won't change anything but I enjoy hearing what people think about my poetry, thx.
i'll drop a sampler of this track soon so you can see how the vershes sound |
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God's Replica
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dope verse I love the imagery of it all
props on that! |
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This was real nice. I am eager to hear the audio.
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the illuminated orator
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probably shouldn't release an album, get a day job, McDonald's is usually hiring...
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Yeah well i'm sure McDonald's IS hiring, maybe you should send them your little resume instead of circling the boards like a vulture for poets/MC's to hate on, thanks. And thanks for your comments everyone, appreciate the inspiration.
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Colossal man made machines storm a land that was once green,
Blowing the countryside into smitherines with heavy artillery, While aircrafts rain death from above, Bringing down lightning upon villagers, Vikings were found to be similar. |
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the illuminated orator
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...well that would be the idea wouldn't it? ... to give people some inspiration to not write the same garbage... you know put some effort into yourself (themselves) or something...
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