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Old 10-05-2007, 07:42 AM   #1
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Old 10-05-2007, 03:41 PM   #2
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Old 10-20-2007, 10:42 AM   #3
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i felt content was lacked for multisyllable rhymes chemes in the begining... some structural errors possibly... lagged toward the middle to end...flow was on point for the middle... keep at it...
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Old 10-22-2007, 08:59 AM   #4
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U have potential to be ill just keep writing.
Spound better than alot of mainstream fiends.
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Old 10-22-2007, 10:04 AM   #5
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U have potential to be ill just keep writing.
Spound better than alot of mainstream fiends.
agreed cha lyrics were on-point but ya structural errors and lacked many multis
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