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Old 10-30-2010, 07:07 AM   #1
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Old 10-30-2010, 05:43 PM   #2
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tight verse, try and varying up your rhyme patterns
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Yeah, i'm fairy new to this rhyming shit and i'm working on it, hopefully i can better with time.
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word no doubt, just keep writing try concerntrating on your first bars and it'll flow right from there

also study your favorite rappers lyrics got to like ohhla.com and look e'm nah mean and see how the songs and rhymes etc.
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