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10-21-2005, 05:30 PM
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Grims Final Chapter
Fase in like a preminition
Leave with suspitions, Dead, gettin inbaulmed ny mortitions Thoughts turn down to hour zero Its clear tho, I came on corp to to voice my opinions Not be a hero... Remember me R.I.P. to the vet Dont forget, I'll roam this mother fucka with a vengence u will regret To the vets of the battlefield, keep winning Turn the page fast, I'll soon make a new begining lil corny shit keep fightin dont forget me ya'll |
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10-21-2005, 07:00 PM
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Priceless:The Modern IsIs
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Re: Grims Final Chapter
What's G R?
I see you're thinking about not posting on this site anymore ... how come? BTW, I didn't know you were 14. That being said, you have your whole life ahead of you, with plenty of options to explore, so don't be so down, okay? As far as you not being a "rapper" is concerned ... I'm sure that a lot of the cats you listen to everyday had that very same thought. Where would they be if they would have given up? If you believe in the game, you have to fight for it. Just keep at it and in time it will be like second nature to you. You'll be spittin' shit in your sleep ... but, you can't just give up ... and above all else, you have to want it first. You feel me? Keep your head up, and ... Peace
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10-21-2005, 07:01 PM
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Location: Toronto
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Re: Grims Final Chapter
your shit is morbid your mind's out of orbit
in darkness and confusion you seem lost like dat hobbit my suggestion, go get a psychiatric session cause sounds like yo ass may have serious depression pent up agression and sexual repressions too much dope, playstation and constant masturbation fascination with apoclaypse and death bro, this shit ain'g good fo yo health, so check yo self! dark thoughts runs through synapses traps like maze until you sanity snaps and collapses end up on matress with straight jacket tight stall padded white walls back and forth rockin' my lil corny shit, nothin personal, meant to be humorous. peace... |
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10-21-2005, 07:07 PM
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Re: Grims Final Chapter
You keep throwin it down. If you're fourteen, you'll be dope at 20. Your vocabulary is very good, I thought you were much older. Keep it up, study rhyme, and take a break once in a while. It clears your mind, and you always come back with more juice.
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10-22-2005, 01:03 AM
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A.k.a Ad Rem
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Re: Grims Final Chapter
dae some real nice words ...sounded like something i told him....
but dont forget the age factor.. nothing more than a actor..? i left some words of concerns... not so sure if i should of... enough said peace.
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