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Old 06-06-2011, 08:49 PM   #1
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Default Do yall think i can take this further

Can I get some honest opinions on if yall think I should persue this with my flow and swag?

The tyler pics are for commercial reasons

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Old 06-06-2011, 09:01 PM   #2
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YOU SOUND LIKE A GAY VERSION OF KENDRICK , IF KENDRICK JUST FINISHED HAVING SEX WITH DRAkE AND TYLER PERRY IS FUCKIN WACK

IF U WANNA SOUND ILL USE THE BASS FROM YA CHEST U BITCH ASSNIGGA
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Old 06-06-2011, 09:29 PM   #3
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haha aight thanks man, kendrick lamar is ill. thanks for the tip
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why have i never heard you before? this is dope.
we should collab some day.
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STYLE WANTs TO BANG LOCUST
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Old 06-06-2011, 10:31 PM   #6
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STYLE WANTs TO BANG ANY WHITE WUCORP MC's or BEATMAKERS.

HE NEEDS HIS 'FIX'
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Old 06-07-2011, 04:56 AM   #8
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Thanx yo and thnx a lot style, nobody checks my shit in audio booth so thought id try here
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Old 06-07-2011, 05:23 AM   #9
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i enjoyed it
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Old 06-07-2011, 07:13 AM   #11
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invest in a proper mic. you got a creative flow some nice wordplay. if you really want people to listen it has to sound appealing.
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Old 06-07-2011, 08:04 AM   #12
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this is not bad at all man.

i think your flow is dope and i like how you rhyme

this song, the lyrics wasnt bad at all. it fit the theme pretty well and it turned out to be a nice song

the only thing i can say is that the track was a little long. I would have made it a little shorter so as to not lose people
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btw, i think its weird as fuck that you put pictures of tyler in your video lmao

also you should stop using the term 'swag' and/or any other deviations of that word
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well i'm sure if you work on your vocab and content you will get a better response out of me but mainly work on that vocab learn the secrets of suffixes it works for Immortal technique

you have your word play and flow down good

do this and my "not bad" may increase to "pretty good" if you want anything higher then that from me you will need to work on your voice

its kind of annoying


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Old 06-07-2011, 05:24 PM   #15
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well i'm sure if you work on your vocab and content you will get a better response out of me but mainly work on that vocab learn the secrets of suffixes it works for Immortal technique

you have your word play and flow down good

do this and my "not bad" may increase to "pretty good" if you want anything higher then that from me you will need to work on your voice

its kind of annoying


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from 1-10

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over all=4(4.1)
Did you just tell somebody else to work on their vocab??

Also, nobody who uses Immortal Technique as a syllabus should be allowed to critique or evaluate rapping ability.
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