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black pope
Join Date: Mar 2006
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Life is all about moves
made with Battleship precision, Gamble with addiction, fueds based on dismissin' "go hard" were conditioned, a Checker'ed past, As MC Lyte said "Stop, Look, and Listen", Call or fold your hand, moving 2 fast, abuses your future, by way of submission, slow stagnant strolls, analyzed by tutors, as they glisten, salts admission, computers, pettiness, technology, arrogance, circumstantial evidence, its all relative, characters Gelatin, Stratego positions, sans evidence, mixed words mettlin' Boggles the mind, eloquent reverence, Scrabble for face time problems arise, kettlin' like patterns in the sky unnaturally allign, settle in, Pictionary clouds from cumulus minds, that never win, cirrus clouds headed in, Jenga design stable yet delicate, from vagabonds, to veterans, its evident, gravity is constant, fall in line, Cranium's collide, cracking skulls, bone and skeleton, dark stratus cloud stratagem, Risk combines, so let'em in, sincerity a rarity, Jeopardy a parody, terribly from the jealousy, felony's carrying, incarcerated ignorance will bury thee, chained yelling let me free, assumed Clue's various scenes, anecdotes used for levity, nimbus cloud Monopoly, precipitation reigns heavily, impairing dreams, fast money seems heavenly, if not for the brevity, unsettling, Trivia Pursuit of easy loot, is the reality and the truth, the fruit of evils root, Chutes & Ladders of a youth, parental discretion reduced, convoluted common courtesy, taken to extremes, Candy Land murder scenes, burgeoning, unnerving dreams Connect 4 protection prepared to duel, the curtain swings the golden rule focus on numero Uno, Sorry I don't see the images in the clouds that you formed, paragraphs are Toppled, I'm yelling Domino! Chess moves Cards dealt, the Dice rolls but who folds ? he hadda need for speed, stayed blitzed, 'n near dead this yay-headed prick lives life on a mirror's edge 'n pleads for a cleared head, red dead redeption from his previous fear obsessed meth head projections created from years of stress, presumably kept writings in a tomb, raiders later exumed, dead rising lead flying, men diving, left 4 dead in killzones the hitman, max payne, he had a rep to peel domes metal gear, concealed chrome, ferocious killer instinct his rhymes wuz so dope he drowned his dealers in ink had paper, boy, to tally, all his dro grown in cali then distributed to folks, in the lower hogan's alley passin' trees, livin' by street code 'n assassians creed these contra commandos strike silent as passin' queefs storming borderlands, plans to command and conquor barrios while snorting quarter gram, prescriptions from dr. mario mafia, red factions, put lead in ya bread basket got'cha clutchin ya stomach, twistin ya fuckin head backwards fresh rap words, that went over they heads, like halo's or planes flown, down range to flame foes, send 'em to saint's row case closed, feared no more, eaten by gears of war left burried in twisted metal, drinking tears that mourn Last edited by ArcherPriest; 06-27-2011 at 09:01 AM. |
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awww SHIT!
y'all had some lyrical exercise shit goin on with the game titles, I dig that. Reminds me of GZA's song on GZA vs MUGGS where he uses all the NFL teams to tell a story.
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weep for lost babylon, the bleeding god, the forgotten sheep slaughtered in a forest of evil fog bordered by a sea of faults, fleeing mobs turn to see the holocaust and become kings and queens of salt screaming shots, police and chalk, wingless fallen demons walking among us as people... -.5Kut |
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Fuck The Law.
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killed it
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this joint is dope..
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black pope
Join Date: Mar 2006
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appreciated fellas
big thx to Ben too for inspirin' this throwback shit, been years since i done one like this |
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aka Loc Daddy Supreme
Join Date: Jun 2003
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Just saw your pm, King of Shits. Guess I'm too late lolz. Never mind, I'm not so sure I'd have been up to it anyway.
Dopeo piece anyway. Magma's verse read well and fluently with it's short lines and punchy sort of structure. Kingshyt Allah structured your verse well with the video game titles throughout, though it would have been much better if you'd mentioned the greatest video game of all time, Egyptian Run... ![]() Enjoyable read nonetheless.
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hot i liked how the first verse was board games then magmas went with video games.. was very cool concept i was actually going to do something like this awhile ago and never got around to it..
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black pope
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good lookin yall
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Crash You In The Clouds!
Join Date: May 2007
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Great piece, real nice originality
MAGMA always comes with the versatility And KingShyt : created from years of stress, presumably kept writings in a tomb, raiders later exumed, dead rising lead flying, men diving, left 4 dead in killzones the hitman, max payne, he had a rep to peel domes metal gear, concealed chrome, ferocious killer instinct his rhymes wuz so dope he drowned his dealers in ink Seriously ?
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