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drop feed wrote it on the spot and came out better then expected been a long time since i dropped summin in here
fuck carlito i do it the john way WAY not the cowboy i mean gacy that means im tryna fuck whatevers below eighteen and over 80 butt rapin babys with my SOLDIERs in this THREAD like old navy a nigga steal from me and i transform to the game in waist deep he PO'd throw my piss tests at my PO's chapped lips check me on your registered sex offenders list just did a bid slightly below your uncle and right before ya fathers dick SNUFF Films turned porno flicks STARRING me like several ASTERISKS the baddest bitch im bashin em' just to make me feel masculine scientific experiment gone WRONG now RIGHT the catalyst suffer cannabilistic damages spawned by sadistic fantasies scalp resemble damiens make my maids hang from banisters my house amity split ya family up like DCF double d's ill rape her chest now where the fat bitches At i dont wanna fuck em ill skin em up like billy buff mr GUMB my dicks on drugs addicted to bitches tongues stab and punch a niggas lungs while takin chugs off fifths of Blood just pick the gun ill point it up and prove to you im fatherless no martyring the stories far from done the ending is marvelous no souls to barter with satanism scattered my thought process later murkin my consciousness these false prophets aint obvious obnoxiousness noxious gases released from capsules-and scars your lungs with carcinogens bi-products claim harmlessness part of it cuz im monsterous but whats that to a group of them fact i see an troop of them blame it on da ha-ha-hallucinogens meet and greet with a few of them compare intestinal recipes hunger got the best of me beatin off to da human centipede "You like human hearts" FIX Me A PLATE shoot a nigga in da grill tell em fix up his face and im ill rollin like a big wheel peddaled by a cyborg infant its not rape if she not awake to say no is it ?
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07-14-2011, 08:35 AM
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the baddest bitch im bashin em' just to make me feel masculine
scientific experiment gone WRONG now RIGHT the catalyst was feeling that line alot... just pick the gun ill point it up and prove to you im fatherless no martyring the stories far from done the ending is marvelous nice start here... "You like human hearts" FIX Me A PLATE shoot a nigga in da grill tell em fix up his face and im ill rollin like a big wheel peddaled by a cyborg infant its not rape if she not awake to say no is it nice finish... not bad at all brotha, not bad at all was feeling it for tha most part, good structure and sum lines that stooD out ot me... keep writing stay up one love two fingaz
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 Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched.. for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System.. Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom Last edited by White N Dangerous; 07-14-2011 at 09:50 AM. |
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07-14-2011, 08:38 AM
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the baddest bitch im bashin em' just to make me feel masculine
scientific experiment gone WRONG now RIGHT the catalyst i like this line alot... "You like human hearts" FIX Me A PLATE shoot a nigga in da grill tell em fix up his face and im ill rollin like a big wheel peddaled by a cyborg infant its not rape if she not awake to say no is it ? good strong finish... good structure overall and pretty nice vocab. good 2 c ur stll around stay up one love two fingaz
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Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched.. for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System.. Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom Last edited by White N Dangerous; 07-14-2011 at 09:48 AM. Reason: DELETE ME |
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07-25-2011, 12:42 AM
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Anymore feed ?
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08-05-2011, 01:20 AM
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08-05-2011, 01:34 AM
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Not bad plus it's nice to see another Odd Future Wolf Gang Kill Them All fan. It's like a Wu Tang Clan 21st century style. Your shit is dirty like stained drawers.
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