ΔЯMΔИ - Ancient Lions Instrumental [Samples Velvet Underground]

[Shower Through The Peephole]

Hey yall, so I like making funky beats, here's one I just made on the Maschine Mikro

http://soundcloud.com/armanwhagwan/m-ancient-lions2

I HOPE U HAVE SUBS, BASS-HEAVU

If you heard the original, re-listen, i originally uploaded a bad file and its fixed now.

[Shower Through The Peephole]

EDIT: HOLY SHIT, I released this without my left channel and GOD THAT WAS GROSS.

I uploaded the fixed version now. Sorry for anybody that listened to the original.

Please give it another try, lmao.

[Shower Through The Peephole]

I'm serious, the first version I produced without my left channel, imagine my surprise when I heard it elsewhere, song sounded fucked up because I only produced hearing the right.

Listen to it now even if you listened to the original, it's nothing like it!

Bumpin to request for criticism

[Drunken Monk]

dope beat fam, i see u been practising and gettin betta, i would hear mo powafull drums but sounds aight keep workin hard and dont give up

[LORD NOSE]

[Drunken Monk]

[LORD NOSE]

[Shower Through The Peephole]

Originally Posted by SUNNY WINTERS

Not sure if you're giving criticism or just being insulting, but what don't you like about it so I know what to improve?

[Shower Through The Peephole]

Rly love to know what Skamp/Jig/Style/Mumm/Graveyard/Hologram think

bump for CRITICISM

[Drunken Monk]

this place is fucking shit, back in the day used to be good but since sunny and their Faggot team are over here itz pure trash

[LORD NOSE]

Originally Posted by power to the people

Not sure if you're giving criticism or just being insulting, but what don't you like about it so I know what to improve?

it wasn't an insult - it just sounds very amateur to me - i expected it to change up more but it didn't - it just doesn't move me -

Originally Posted by Drunken Monk

this place is fucking shit, back in the day used to be good but since sunny and their Faggot team are over here itz pure trash

so i'm supposed to like everything i hear in here or else ?

lol - my faggot team ?


who is on this team ? - tell me


pattin each other on the ass for their efforts and saying good job is whats killing Hip Hops image - i could teach yall a whole bunch of shit but yall too arrogant so why bother - son asked for criticism and i replied - stop crying

[Shower Through The Peephole]

I feel you though, I could have added a whole dimension by making random changes in the melody or its effects. That woulda been nice. Thanks.

Well of course it's amateur, I'm an amateur -_-

It doesn't change up much because it's my rap beat, not an electronic instrumental track. I left the focus for my vocals, but it does change (sometimes subtly) in case you didn't notice:

Howl/dinging -> four bar full melody sans hats -> two bar bridge -> four bar with hats -> four bar without hats -> four bar without kicks and fade of string melody -> outro howl/dinging

And the kickpattern alternates every four bars as well.

Keep in mind, I made it with my own rap over it in mind. Check out how it worked for my last full song (vocals and all): http://wutang-corp.com/forum/showthread.php?t=118338

Criticism appreciated.

[LORD NOSE]

Originally Posted by power to the people

I feel you though, I could have added a whole dimension by making random changes in the melody or its effects. That woulda been nice. Thanks.

Well of course it's amateur, I'm an amateur -_-

this reply right here was all you needed

but you had to go and try to school me

Originally Posted by power to the people

It doesn't change up much because it's my rap beat, not an electronic instrumental track. I left the focus for my vocals, but it does change (sometimes subtly) in case you didn't notice:

YOU left the focus for YOUR vocals but asked US to criticize YOUR "rap beat" - and that is what i gave you -

it is an electronic instrumental - because you made it using electronics and posted it here with no vocals on it for us to criticize electronically -

i noticed the small changes - i notice everything -

Originally Posted by power to the people

Howl/dinging -> four bar full melody sans hats -> two bar bridge -> four bar with hats -> four bar without hats -> four bar without kicks and fade of string melody -> outro howl/dinging

And the kickpattern alternates every four bars as well.

lmao - maybe being so technical with it is taking away from you expressing your shit

Originally Posted by power to the people

Keep in mind, I made it with my own rap over it in mind.

then maybe you should have kept it in your mind and "rapped" over it

Originally Posted by power to the people

Check out how it worked for my last full song (vocals and all): http://wutang-corp.com/forum/showthread.php?t=118338

Criticism appreciated.

i'll check it in a few - but keep in mind that when i come into this section, i'm not going to baby niggas about they craft - no disrespect - if you just started, great - keep going - when i was coming up, i studied my elders - now as an elder, i study the youth -

[Shower Through The Peephole]

I appreciate the criticism bro, why you crying?

It's a general response so others can read and criticize better with the further context I've provided, not everything is aimed at you.

Def listen to my linked track though, it's a better representation of my music.

Don't be so internet-sensitive again lmao.

[LORD NOSE]

Originally Posted by power to the people

I appreciate the criticism bro, why you crying?

It's a general response so others can read and criticize with the context I've provided, not everything is aimed at you.

Don't be so internet-sensitive again lmao.

sensitive ?

this is about you and your rap beat - i'm a part of the general population here so i responded - if you aimed it at everyone, i'm one of everybody - stop trying to be so smart and stupid at the same dam time (Future) - i'm helping you here - if you are an amateur, ask questions - sincere ones - humble yourself if you indeed want to grow -

i listened to the other link you posted and i got to tell you.........

we are in 2012 - i just expect to hear an evolution of the kultures expression
i am spoiled with and used to high grade shit - i've seen niggas get beat the fuck up for saying wack shit in a cypher - the standards here gotta be raised