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JahroamDaGod · 09-13-2012, 04:43 PM

Marked by appearances and stiff lines
Audiences are targeted
Park benches twisted by arsenic and stricnine
Shift formations
Name defensive ordinances to perform on the fly
Protect the truth with beautiful lies,
Brutal disguises for booted giants
Crews and rivals collide to exchange huge appliances
Crimson dye rinses,
Commit to life sentences on some do or die shit
Conmen and dark Killahs willin to deny their bars and lines exist
Dead men reckoned by lead pens
Well-read prints share Sith elements
Propel shells at past precedents with shreds of black evidence
Labeled combative and rebellious, I just tell just it as it's happenin

JahroamDaGod · 12-27-2012, 04:12 PM

Connected by expensive dreams and inexperienced Kings
fear is a living thing, breathing and seething at carefully hidden seams
suspicious at being lifted by non-physical wings,
Babylonian regimes require we all bow to crowned criminals and their chemical decrees
cry me a river (af)forded by the Rock of Gibraltar and her Priests,
the cost never decreases, the law of Offices and the Streets
Watchmen falter in the face of becoming the Fallen or simply men of peace
when the real menace is behind the mirror's streaks
my kind has disappeared like ghosts, rolled bones rattling stones and sheets
shatter roads, knotted ropes swing heavy with bodies in the breeze
measure the topography in macrological degrees,
Chrono Trigger heat,
volcanic drifting heat distributed digitally through operational streams
raw blood feeds my consumption of beats,
knotted and blunted speech,
led by muddied feet to an unwanted destiny....

Drunken Monk · 12-27-2012, 05:03 PM

Obey · 12-30-2012, 06:43 AM

the cost never decreases, the law of Offices and the Streets
Watchmen falter in the face of becoming the Fallen or simply men of peace
when the real menace is behind the mirror's streaks

Best part imo. Honestly for feed back though i thought it was a little too much adjective then noun or adverb then verb, with no solid story behind the piece. With that said you had some good ideas and a broad vocab

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JahroamDaGod · 01-28-2013, 04:16 AM

Judged by killers with chisels,
World-enders, the sculptors of men
Stand tall in tunnels of wind,
Lands overrun with rivers and no fish
Pillars survive with columns of scripts,
Pagan priests call for us to breathe through filters of sin
Wild animals in the press,
They walk among us as if mirrors don't exist
Inhuman vocals claiming my soul as kin, I won't deny them
My heritage has been proclaimed by blind pens,
Confide in the liars of today's times and trends,
Only by hiding the truth can u guide fools

JahroamDaGod · 02-15-2013, 09:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS

Throw back most cats can’t purely out sport my javelin options to win are minimal to anything incidental trying trump me out my hotel,
without anything in rear well/

upgraded from Section 8, my peers excel
spreadin thick legs on egyptian sheets, exhale fumes on Microsoft screens
propel caustic speech,
college professors robbin re-tah-ded geez for their odd futures and dodgin deez
stomp streets against hives of bees,
maintain high achieves as the higher chief, the god of grief
burning lime trees trace the shorelines,
Lake Michigan is at war tonight, the poor can't afford to buy peace
hold court with iron pieces against the fiendish hordes,
wired,
fired swords riding winged beasts through the sky in the morning
mothers cry in mourning, their eyes-a-bleed crimson
hovering on the brink of death, you won't die without my permission...

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS · 02-16-2013, 07:40 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by JahroamDaGod

upgraded from Section 8, my peers excel
spreadin thick legs on egyptian sheets, exhale fumes on Microsoft screens
propel caustic speech,
college professors robbin re-tah-ded geez for their odd futures and dodgin deez
stomp streets against hives of bees,
maintain high achieves as the higher chief, the god of grief
burning lime trees trace the shorelines,
Lake Michigan is at war tonight, the poor can't afford to buy peace
hold court with iron pieces against the fiendish hordes,
wired,
fired swords riding winged beasts through the sky in the morning
mothers cry in mourning, their eyes-a-bleed crimson
hovering on the brink of death, you won't die without my permission...

damnnnnnnnnnnnnnn that was dope

JahroamDaGod · 03-09-2013, 02:48 PM

Pick up the chisel and build again
black face and silver-skinned,
I am a bewildering blend of civilization and sin
spit glistening webs of evil dread,
blistered and eaten flesh stitched together with venomous thread
exaggerated features of the reaching dead,
stagger the streets blind, eager to be fed
intravenous deceit,
blunt needles breathing poisonous smoke
high tolerance treatment invoked,
each demon that spoke became the voices of ghosts
I don't sleep, walk the halls in silence
walls collide, each out of alignment
my shadow twitches in the darkness, I start firin'
close my open irises,
this close to the lion's den I came to know I am Osirus
born in the village of Midas, I am brother to Orion
the blood of Titans, the son of tyrants
at birth I touched the horizon,
I am the burned among white men
spark sticks and cough thick clouds of flies like phlegm,
my kin are now a dying breed
the identifying markers are five genes,
traced in triangular shapes in our DNA sequentially...

White N Dangerous · 03-09-2013, 08:12 PM

nice scripts solid vocab, and u have good structure so keep that shit up

this was my fav line in the last verse

high tolerance treatment invoked,
each demon that spoke became the voices of ghosts

thougth that this bar was cool i liked it good read

JahroamDaGod · 04-09-2013, 08:19 PM

some see me as old and withered,
a crippled criminal,
a crazy Seminole wizard from a Windy City
chisel permanent entries on shifting seas,
blaze University furniture and inhale the degrees
despite stutterin speech
blunt reasoning becomes salty seasoning
son of unliving things,
burned and blacked by my own hands to gain nativity
hoodlums in hoods hooked by the hood's possibilities,
we in the basement farmin for clouds, lost in the crowd...

09-13-2012, 04:43 PM	#1
JahroamDaGod Join Date: Sep 2012 Posts: 59 Rep Power: 0	outtakes Marked by appearances and stiff lines Audiences are targeted Park benches twisted by arsenic and stricnine Shift formations Name defensive ordinances to perform on the fly Protect the truth with beautiful lies, Brutal disguises for booted giants Crews and rivals collide to exchange huge appliances Crimson dye rinses, Commit to life sentences on some do or die shit Conmen and dark Killahs willin to deny their bars and lines exist Dead men reckoned by lead pens Well-read prints share Sith elements Propel shells at past precedents with shreds of black evidence Labeled combative and rebellious, I just tell just it as it's happenin Last edited by JahroamDaGod; 12-17-2012 at 06:55 PM.

03-09-2013, 08:12 PM	#9
White N Dangerous LyRiCaL sHiNoBi Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Las Vegas Age: 24 Posts: 1,897 Rep Power: 12	nice scripts solid vocab, and u have good structure so keep that shit up this was my fav line in the last verse high tolerance treatment invoked, each demon that spoke became the voices of ghosts thougth that this bar was cool i liked it good read __________________ Tables Turn..Which Made it Worse, Engaged N' Searched.. for a Way ta' Learn, how ta Take tha' Curse of the Weight of Earth Incase it Curved, and Strained my Nervous System.. Rage it Burst, n' Explained in Words how ta Further Wisdom

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12-27-2012, 04:12 PM	#2
JahroamDaGod Join Date: Sep 2012 Posts: 59 Rep Power: 0	Connected by expensive dreams and inexperienced Kings fear is a living thing, breathing and seething at carefully hidden seams suspicious at being lifted by non-physical wings, Babylonian regimes require we all bow to crowned criminals and their chemical decrees cry me a river (af)forded by the Rock of Gibraltar and her Priests, the cost never decreases, the law of Offices and the Streets Watchmen falter in the face of becoming the Fallen or simply men of peace when the real menace is behind the mirror's streaks my kind has disappeared like ghosts, rolled bones rattling stones and sheets shatter roads, knotted ropes swing heavy with bodies in the breeze measure the topography in macrological degrees, Chrono Trigger heat, volcanic drifting heat distributed digitally through operational streams raw blood feeds my consumption of beats, knotted and blunted speech, led by muddied feet to an unwanted destiny....

12-27-2012, 05:03 PM	#3
Drunken Monk Veteran Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 7,738 Rep Power: 41

01-28-2013, 04:16 AM	#5
JahroamDaGod Join Date: Sep 2012 Posts: 59 Rep Power: 0	Judged by killers with chisels, World-enders, the sculptors of men Stand tall in tunnels of wind, Lands overrun with rivers and no fish Pillars survive with columns of scripts, Pagan priests call for us to breathe through filters of sin Wild animals in the press, They walk among us as if mirrors don't exist Inhuman vocals claiming my soul as kin, I won't deny them My heritage has been proclaimed by blind pens, Confide in the liars of today's times and trends, Only by hiding the truth can u guide fools

03-09-2013, 02:48 PM	#8
JahroamDaGod Join Date: Sep 2012 Posts: 59 Rep Power: 0	Pick up the chisel and build again black face and silver-skinned, I am a bewildering blend of civilization and sin spit glistening webs of evil dread, blistered and eaten flesh stitched together with venomous thread exaggerated features of the reaching dead, stagger the streets blind, eager to be fed intravenous deceit, blunt needles breathing poisonous smoke high tolerance treatment invoked, each demon that spoke became the voices of ghosts I don't sleep, walk the halls in silence walls collide, each out of alignment my shadow twitches in the darkness, I start firin' close my open irises, this close to the lion's den I came to know I am Osirus born in the village of Midas, I am brother to Orion the blood of Titans, the son of tyrants at birth I touched the horizon, I am the burned among white men spark sticks and cough thick clouds of flies like phlegm, my kin are now a dying breed the identifying markers are five genes, traced in triangular shapes in our DNA sequentially...

04-09-2013, 08:19 PM	#10
JahroamDaGod Join Date: Sep 2012 Posts: 59 Rep Power: 0	some see me as old and withered, a crippled criminal, a crazy Seminole wizard from a Windy City chisel permanent entries on shifting seas, blaze University furniture and inhale the degrees despite stutterin speech blunt reasoning becomes salty seasoning son of unliving things, burned and blacked by my own hands to gain nativity hoodlums in hoods hooked by the hood's possibilities, we in the basement farmin for clouds, lost in the crowd...