ΔЯMΔИ - Lentil Sprouts [Instrumental]

[power to the people]

Went pretty experimental on this one.. took some criticism last time about my drum patterns, tried to do better on this one. They're still kinda weak.. ionno why I'm so shit at drum patterns, even after studying them a bit.

http://soundcloud.com/armanwhagwan/m...s-instrumental

Criticism welcome.

[check two]

do you eat a lot of lentils?

[power to the people]

Not as much as I should, to be honest.

[JehovAllah]

lollollol^

this has alot of potential bro
i think its a tad bit too slow for me
also the drum pattern falls off here n there
but if u was to re work on this man this can be a fuckin banger,
i'd love to spit on this one....

[Drunken Monk]

^^ feelin the same,

[Drunken Monk]

btw arman when this faggots are gonna give u the vet status?

[power to the people]

lol thanks guys. ye, im still shit at composin and making drum patterns but hopefully with daily practise and grind i'll get better. youtube tutorials too.

takin yall criticisms to heart, thats why i post them here.

much love.

[THE MASON]

do you play your drums to a metronome? if not try that

just keep grinding, it will all come around. eventuallly you build up a natural timing

[JehovAllah]

i feel as tho u cant learn that shit
drums are part of my heritage being rican IE African/NativeTainoIndian
if i was to make beats ma nigga it be a wrap
i bang beats out on the table errday since the school lunch tables from way back
i was there
i beat box everyday as a personal soothing tick

drum patterns and timing
it has to be in you like the soul of a songstress

ionno, thats just me...
pardon the rant.

[THE MASON]

ye thats true as well.

but look at my progression. if you listen to a beat i made for the first few times, to what i can do now, its definitely enhanced. and thats partly cause i made beats daily, sometimes 5 a day until i was confident, like "yo, i can just knock it out now, fuck it"

so in part its both having the natural gift and developing it to allow it to flow freely. any great musician has to work at it to become great.

[JehovAllah]

Originally Posted by THE MASON

ye thats true as well.

but look at my progression. if you listen to a beat i made for the first few times, to what i can do now, its definitely enhanced. and thats partly cause i made beats daily, sometimes 5 a day until i was confident, like "yo, i can just knock it out now, fuck it"

so in part its both having the natural gift and developing it to allow it to flow freely. any great musician has to work at it to become great.

i rly dig that^
coming from my early songs n delivery to where im at now... WORD
which is why i said whut i said on my first post on this thread.
PEACE!


B, i accidently edited ur post and put my reply on there lol
i be high meng

[THE MASON]

lmao, i did that for the longest when i became a mod too, sall good.

but ye yo, its like you have a gift, but you cant take away from the grind. cause for me imma keep workin til that shit is powder, like pure dust and you just gotta inhale that shit or die. thats how i make my music.

bring music into your life to breathe life into the music