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come on someone, hit me with some shit
i can spark it, or someone else can, i'm not bothered 2 verses each, 3 votes to win peace |
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First battle ever and I'll set it off.
I can kill u wit one line when I ryhme, just pushed me red line/ I heard yo ass was the prez of the lyrically declined/ Gotcha shakin like muslims standing in line at the rib spot, thicken the plot/ Talkin bout the hole in the ground thats ur next restin spot/ Over the glock, left eye closed right eyebrow up like the rock/ Threw ya flow in the nile river you in a state of shock/ you went thru the wrong door son I thought ya knew/ You's a soft serve kid niggas always lickin at u/ when u step in this forum son u gettin raped wit glory/ I feel bad u a yougin and this is statutory/ The Phenix has risen nigga yo style came and WINT(E)/ you better find the nearst alter drop to yo knees and repent/
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not that i am any better, but the verse has a lot of mistakes and is hard to understand
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THE DIFFERENCE
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when u step in this forum son u gettin raped wit glory/
I feel bad u a yougin and this is statutory/ i actually really liked this line verse isnt as bad as yall sayin it is yo its his first battle but still....Falcon's the toughest ur gonna face peace |
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JOKER FAM
Join Date: Dec 2004
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yeah, sup winte, winte's good, i dont know why the ins.net cats thought i beat him and legendary, inexperienced voters i guess,,...that battle was the weirdest battle i've ever been in.....suuuuu for winte, peace man
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stay silent, as i slay another random writer
cuz my styles relentless like a stalking hungry tiger phenix rose, but fell from subtle bloodblisters his vision split, on the pitchfork that skewers victims a vicious swing, phenix bathed with singes cuz i spit lyrics as hot as a naked flaming princess think a glock can stop the force of hercules? i crush mc's then fuck you up like mushroom tea thrown in the nile, i flow right down the river then clown this rapper with solar powered splinters rip his eardrum, left mangled like jack the ripper then i rebuilt him in the killer falcons amphitheatre nice attempt for a first verse. do you still want to go for another one? peace |
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Yeah we can go another round. I wanna get tight. Let's go
Wit the rage of a fierce lion I thank you for replyin/ I would say ya verse was tight but then I would be lyin/ So hot I keep ya fryin, strike force wit the iron/ And my bullets can cross ya mind anytime like Brian/ So son put on ya shoulder pads and buckle ya chinstrap/ Now run and take winte's wack verse back..oops/ relapse wit the tech or you can die by my sword/ Aye forum I found the wack rapper now where's my reward/ Disconnect ya keyboard son this battle is finished/ If ya think I ran outta jucie nigga let me replenish/ You don't want it wit PH, ya better call ya DH/ Cash ya weak rhymes but you can keep the rebate/ Dont fuck wit me son because I move in stealth/ ya dick just reached ya asshole cause ya fucked ya self/
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thats ill phenix, that disconnect your keyboard shit, dope
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Thanks sicka. I'm tryna get my shit tight get my darts sharp ya know!
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update on phenix who thought he can take me
i punched a line then he inflated like flour in bakeries swim in trouble, you float on arctic seas then left frozen like an out-of-date piece of masonry verbal slashes, caused a lack of spinal cord which means this lying faggot never held a sword re-attach my keyboard, press the seven buttons then your skulls devoured by eleven starving munchkins i keep my brain, encased in liquid nitrogen so that if you attacked i laughed and watch you fry again my minds intent, to cruise on verbal highs and victimise this rapper across my mystic skies manic snipes, replace your crumbled passion cuz i'm felt like little kids left near michael jackson aight nice battle. lets take 4 votes to win this peace |
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Now known as Defcee
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Winte took it...but PHENIX had some dope lines, too...
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winte hands down....phenix did real good for his first try...no doubt bout that
but Falcon jus takes it all this time yo nice battle peace |
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Join Date: Jul 2004
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yeah the first verse wasn't garbage, is was kinda o.k for a niggas first time doing this shit
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