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Junior Member
Join Date: Jun 2005
Age: 27
Posts: 36
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See when times got rough u were always buy my side
Love, hate, joy u were down to ride No matter the time or cost I could gaze into Ur eyes and juss get lost And never be found, loose myself for days Until u bring me back to earth in crazy ways Damn girl I would have died for u No matter the cost I gave my life to u And what did u do ya did what all females do But I won’t cuss to u, juss for the sake of art But I’ll never forget how u broke my heart when i heard a that u alledgedly sex someone up in his car ofcourse u swore u didn't but i never listened and i'm not sure why Maybe I was wrong maybe u didn’t lie And if so that guy should die “edit that it out of the note” I’ll slice his throat pull his skin over his forehead to watch his esophagus choke That’s not a want it’s a need a need to see him bleed and beg for mercy on his knees and apologize for taking u away from me See I’m not crazy I juss cared for what I had and if ur pissed than my bad naw u deserve it cuz I live wit pain my hearts constantly hurt’in And I have to walk around and act as if every things perfect. So tell me did I deserve it Or would u take it back if u could No matter what the outcomes not good Either he’s goin in a casket or I’m goin mental and for the record that slap was accidental so hush little baby don’t u cry I don’t wanna hear no more lies I’m done wit ya trick ass lil bitch ass betta think fast Here I come So hush little baby don’t u cry And u best not act surprised You don’t care about no one except ya damn self It’s juss like hell bein friends |
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Taoist Saint
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Yah quite touching in a way, its hard trying to express in such a method, and most find that they exit from their original style. But it was nice, flowed well.
But people should not be afraid to express parts they think is emotional, or sensitive!!!!! Peace PS: would like to check more of your posts in here!!! |
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